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Reviews for Lucky Strike

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - rigger42 on July 07, 2015
    My imagination about the dogs is pretty horrific. On the one hand I don't ever want to know, on the other, Harry needs to tell someone at some point, probably, in order to start getting past it. I'm kind of surprised they don't try to spend more time at the Malfoy residence, hoping to lure out the unicorns for more Harry-healing. Maybe it would be too much pushing?

    Obviously the unicorns sense the curse scar -- is it a horcrux in this version or just dark residue? The Potters seem too emotional to be trying to get close to Harry just to manipulate him into dying, and while I could imagine Albus leaving out that part, I'm at a loss as to his argument for leaving him with Petunia and not retrieving him once they were safe enough for other children.


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  • From ANON - mithrilandtj on July 01, 2015
    Cool! Can't wait for more!
    BTW you changed the Healer's name from Stuart to Stewart in the last chapter
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  • From ANON - autumngold on June 30, 2015
    Incredible new chapter! I am so glad that even James and Lily are realizing that their reasons for leaving Harry behind were stupid. Leaving a child on a doorstep with no protection was just stupid, and the fact that Lily and James let Dumbledore do it and never checked up on him makes them equally as guilty. They, and their family, will never suffer enough. I just hope that Draco doesn't start to like their daughter, she obviously never cared enough about her older brother to even send him a letter. Outstanding update to your wonderful story! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - starr on June 29, 2015
    man can't wait for that meeting with the so called parents !!!!!!!!!!!!yes set Draco on him !!!!!!! Thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!!
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  • From teriwright on June 28, 2015
    I'm happy to see that we're going to finally get some answers soon. I hope the next chapter has some pretty fireworks :-)
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  • From ANON - starr on May 11, 2015
    I want to be a fly on the wall when harry gets to blow up at James !!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the update 1!!!!!!! Harry's brother is just like his dad when he was a kid , a bully !!!!!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on May 11, 2015
    Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! I wonder if James and Lily know that Dumbledore expects Harry to die for the "Greater Good". Is that why they abandoned him? Or are they innocent in that? Personally, I still hope that Harry is able to hurt them someway, even if it is only taking away their money. Leaving a child on a doorstep is a criminal act, something James, Lily and Dumbledore should pay for. Then, while Harry is being abused and Sirius thrown in prison, they play happy family together with all of their new kids. It is like they still don't even feel guilty and excuse themselves for what they did. Fabulous story! Thank you for the excellent new chapter!
    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - history on March 26, 2015
    I love how Alastor is here:).
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  • From ANON - Mashkai on March 23, 2015
    I wish you were on AO3 as your stories are the only reason I come to this website anymore~ Lovely update, this is one of my favorites at the moment. Looking forward to the next chapter:)
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  • From ANON - snape_lust on March 21, 2015
    What a great angle to take with Jamie: "Your actions are helping the bad guys!

    Let's see if it works. If not, the only suggestion I would have is to remove him from school. Drastic but information control during wartime is 1000% more important that the feelings of a spoiled, entitled, CLUELESS brat.
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  • From ANON - starr on March 21, 2015
    Harry's brother is just like him father, it seams that they are both little kids that have to have to get there way always !!!!! and Harry is far like them ....love that they are going to spy on Dubbles...Thanks !!!!
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  • From ANON - staar on February 10, 2015
    I'll tell you I read the first page once and left it there ,,,but today don't know WHY I read everything and glad I did really good .....hope to see more soon Thanks !!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on February 09, 2015
    Your story is wonderful! With every chapter i just hope that Dumbledore and the Potters have to pay for leaving Harry all alone. Their reasons were stupid for leaving Harry, and they didn't even take precautions with a little baby, I just hope they have to pay for being cowards. Hopefully Moody will be able to find out what Dumbledore is really up to. Excellent update! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on December 29, 2014
    I am so glad that Draco and his friends are going to try and get information from Jamie. I just hope that Ron, Hermione and Neville don't make that impossible. Personally, I keep hoping that Dumbledore and the Potters have to pay more for the choices they made. Please! Especially the way they've come back all high and mighty expecting to be the heroes, after leaving a baby boy on a doorstep with no protection. Outstanding new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on November 26, 2014
    Outstanding update! I love the fact that it might be Jamie's big mouth that ruins all of Dumbledore's big plans and manipulations. That would serve Dumbledore right, but I hope he has to pay for his crimes even more than he already has. Leaving a baby on a doorstep is criminal. Lily and James are horrible for never sending a letter or trying to check up on him. Wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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