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Reviews for Instinctive

By : goldhorse
  • From Kimbovet on August 17, 2013
    Great writing!!! I really liked your take on werewolves in the HP universe. Maybe the Muse will be interested in a sequel on the pack when their children are older & tell us more about Harry/Severus & Ginny/Hooch. Pretty please. :-)
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  • From ANON - margiere on August 17, 2013
    Great chapter. I so happy the pack was able to get free and everyone got their human forms back. The Wolfe behaviors while adjusting back to human forms sound hilarious. Draco humping and peeing on Remus was just too funny for words. Wolves are truly magnificent animals and you portray them beautifully. This is an awesome story.
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  • From demonsangel on August 17, 2013
    What?! That's the end already? Aw...sad. But it was such a great little story! I loved the twist at the end with Harry and Ginny ending up with Snape and Hooch! Great job hun. I can't wait to read more of your work!
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  • From ANON - margiere on August 16, 2013
    This story is intense and I love it. I really feel connected to the captives. The cruelty of their punishment is heartwretching. I admire Draco's perseverance to adapt and be available for the others that have come after him. I hope they can gain their freedom soon.
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on August 16, 2013
    Interesting premiss. Milady, you have "COMPLETE" in your description. You might want to remove that if there are going to be installments.
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  • From demonsangel on August 15, 2013
    Omg. I love this! It's similar but so different from what you have done so far! I can't wait to read more and so glad I noticed it! Glad Harry isn't as dense as Ron.
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  • From ANON - Shani on August 15, 2013
    Damn! I love it!:-)
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  • From Solariel89 on August 15, 2013
    I have to say, this wasn't what I was expecting.... But you really have outdone yourself with this one. I like it! You're reveals aren't too sudden and your wolf characterizations are just perfect! :D I just wish I could write half as well as this....
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  • From ANON - sillygreeneyes on August 15, 2013
    This is absolutely fucking awesome! I definitely want to read more!! You freaking rock!!!
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  • From Hardygirl133 on August 15, 2013
    want to read more!!!!
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  • From XiaoZhen on August 15, 2013
    This is so interesting!!! I can't wait to see the rest. I'm very intrigued on how you're gonna end this. There's multiple scenario that I can think of, but the most realistic I think would leave them as they are now. I mean, there's the whole pups thing, and of course if they do manage to communicate with the keepers, they are just muggles. Most likely they will send Draco and the others to scientists. And even if they managed to contact the wizarding world, there's no guarantee that there will br antitode. Even if there is, what will happen to Luna and the pups? It's a bit confusing but since you mentioned that this is already finish, I'm even more intrigued on how you're going to progress with this. I can't wait!!
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  • From ANON - Lexy on August 15, 2013
    More. More! For the love of Merlin please write more!
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  • From ANON - angel0fmusic on August 14, 2013
    Interesting start. I like where it's going, but the description on where they are as far as enclosures is a bit confusing. Great story though.
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