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Reviews for Independence of the Dark

By : Callisto
  • From ANON - Chris D on March 04, 2014
    Interesting chapter. I don't know if its my favorite, because something about it just sits funny, however, it was still interesting. I'm excited about Harry finally getting to use that masterpiece you call his wand though! �� Also while this chapter was longer it still doesn't make up for the disgracefully short chapter from the past week, so plz update soon, also if you want to make your chapters even longer, I'm sure we won't mind as readers. �� As always keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on March 04, 2014
    yay i loved this so much! i cant wait to read MORE so please don't keep us waiting too long :)
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  • From ANON - rae on March 04, 2014
    PLEASE add me to your update list!
    i love the idea of harry topping a few before draco but you said that the dark one didnt share or touch otheres for a verry good reason, that might contradict allowing harry to ave a few before draco, anywho i hope draco turns up soon!
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  • From Leania07 on March 02, 2014
    Sounds good to me; I'm not a strict "Harry needs to wait for Draco" in every aspect. He can do other things besides penetration, after all, half the fun is experimentation. Besides, being stuck in a "time free dimension" or what ever you want to call it, he could be there for what may seem like years. **Now just so I understand this, even if the time they spend would be similar to years, they won't age, and/or have the effect that *externally* they were only gone for an hour or so?**

    I'm enjoying this story so far with the choices you've made, and the tutors you have. Keep up the good work, look forward to the next.

    Leania
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  • From ANON - Foop on March 02, 2014
    Hey there, great chapter :) I do like the idea of Draco being Harry's first, but him still having a bit of fun before hand :) The explanation of the 'bloodlust' was cool, I liked it :) Hope for more soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 01, 2014
    Dra co, Dra co, Dra co! I'm on team "Draco for First Time" for sure. Andreas is very nice but I don't know...he has no history with Harry and he has his own problem. Can't you find him someone else? How about Ginny or Blaise or Ha Ha Ha Severus. Hmmm yes Severus or even Remus whose gentle smart and loyal nature would care for him and make Andreas first in his life which he has never had. And that way they could both watch over Harry. Draco is coming soon I hope.
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  • From ANON - Sharae on February 25, 2014
    Love it, please continue and add me to your update mail list ?
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  • From ANON - ails on February 18, 2014
    hey just found this story on the bus ride home...its a great story hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - j on February 18, 2014
    Excited to see another dark powerful Harry story. Excited to learn more about his tutors. Harry needs to experience a dark handsome vampire. As much as I like Harry and Draco its fun to see Draco squirm a little. Possessive Draco is hot
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  • From ANON - Krisianna on February 17, 2014
    I don't mind Harry having a fling, but still feel that he would hesitate to have a relationship with a shopkeeper's assistant (Jacques), not sure about an instructor. I feel that he would most likely choose wait until after the training is done, but some hot, steamy fantasies might be fun to read. :P Sadly, Harry just doesn't seem the type to 'give' himself to someone else he hardly knows(whether top or bottom), so regardless, there will probably have to be a great deal of trust built up first.

    Sorry about the anonymous reviews, but I just can't get AFF to allow me to review logged in for some reason.
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  • From ANON - Mocca on February 17, 2014
    That's wonderful story . Details but not very details . Some story just has ver long details . I love your story . May i ask ?? How come Draco will be Harry "first" if they don't spend enough time together ?! And i very grateful theres "no cling" . Coz i like them so much so i don't want to share . Forgive me coz my rudeness . *grin shepples* I just want they belong each other first . But if i follow your story , i will assume that Harry will become like Dark Ones . Wrap just each other not one else .
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  • From Leania07 on February 16, 2014
    Oh how interesting, I'm sure Filius will be an insider for Harry; being part creature himself he understands the injustices done upon creatures better than anyone, all but Remus anyway. Not sure if you'll have Harry tell him all that Dumbledore has done or not, but I think he would be appalled. Glad to hear Harry will get as much time as he needs to get the training done, especially 'taming' his magic. Is it really taming or more of finding acceptance and/or proving his worth to use it? Can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work. So glad to see updates again ^.^

    Leania
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on February 16, 2014
    im glad to see that you are back and i wish you all the best wishes :)
    i cant wait to see what is to come next! what will the charms teacher have to say to our hero and when does draco come into the picture? and does blowjobs or handjobs count as sex? because if not harry and our vampire friend can still have some fun after training.....
    please update again soon !!!!
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  • From ANON - savannah.morgan on February 15, 2014
    I love this story and was so excited to see a new chapter....I am looking forward to the training and his return to Hogwarts. And I can't wait for Harry and Draco when they get together. Look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 15, 2014
    I'm anxious for Draco to get here and stake his claim on Harry. There are too many posers showing up and Draco is one of my favorites as well as they have some history. Hurry Harry because I worry what Voldemort has in mind for Draco much less poor Lucius. Harry could protect him/them I hope. And absolutely yes Draco should be Harry's first!
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