Click Here!

Reviews for Independence of the Dark

By : Callisto
  • From ANON - Mitchie on February 14, 2014
    Oh my goodness. You hold on me through this story is impeccable. I dont know how you do it, but your perfect control of the characterization is flawless, manipulating the mindsets to be believable and fit with canon up until the beginning of your story. Im jealous. Keep writing!! Much love and cookies.
    Report Review

  • From blackicekitten98 on February 12, 2014
    Can't wait to read more! Looking forward to more chapters.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Dustin on February 12, 2014
    Awesome story. I really love how you are writing it and developing everything. I can't wait to read more!!! Please add me to the email list!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - The Pink Fuzzy Elephant on February 08, 2014
    This is a fantastic story I would love to read more when you have time to update. :D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lea on January 22, 2014
    Hello there,
    I read the story so far and I admit that I'm amazed that a creature-like-fanfiction can still surprise me, because I really thought that I have read it all.
    I will definitly be back for chapter seven.

    LG
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Krisianna on January 22, 2014
    Lovely story! I know that eventually this will be Draco x Harry, but that doesn't mean that Harry cannot play a little first. However, I simply cannot see Harry having a relationship or even just sex with his tailor. Besides, I would hate to see Jacques' future destroyed for a mere fling. I got the impression that Jacques is a serious designer and it would be very bad for his reputation to have an affair with a client.
    Report Review

  • From AidaLily on January 21, 2014
    I just saw this story today and already I love it. I can't wait to read more of it so update as soon as you are able please. Also, I would very much like Draco to be with Harry first. Reading your other author's notes, I am happy this is a bottom!Harry story and don't mind if Harry tops from time to time. Every top story with Harry seems to have Draco leading him anyway even though Draco is the bottom. *smiles* I love the idea of Draco topping. So yeah... Harry with Draco as his first is my vote.

    Now for my review:

    I like that Harry hasn't been some push over with some acting skills. I love how he considers Dumbledore to be one of his enemies, because seriously Dumbledore is a manipulative bastard. Anyway, one of the things I noticed and had enjoyed was not making Ginny out to also be a traitor to Harry and making her unaware of Ron and her mother. It is nice to see a story where Ginny isn't some overly obsessive, evil, shrieking harpy who wants to kill anyone who may take Harry's attention from her. I hope she is as compliant when you put Harry/Draco together.

    I also enjoyed reading that Lucius is not some mad man who hates his son and only wants to kiss Voldemort's behind. It is nice to see Lucius in a story more willing to make fun of himself without being secretly an order spy or something. Finally, someone was also nice to Kreacher in a story. Thank you for that as well.

    I can't wait to see where else you go with the story. I am curious as to whether Harry tries to get himself sorted into Slytherin though. Great job on the story so far.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Chris D on January 20, 2014
    Another great chapter! Loved the wand Harry was presented with, an absolutely awesome and ingenious work of art. Like the snakes to. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - savannah.morgan on January 19, 2014
    I say that Draco should be Harry's first....and by the way I love this story and can't wait for more
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Draco lover on January 19, 2014
    I really like this story. And I cant wait to see where it goes. However I have to vote that I want Draco to be Harry's first. I just love love stories. Great job. Cant wait for more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - yngoldfogee on January 19, 2014
    Looking forward to your next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 18, 2014
    No, No fling please! Harry and Draco understanding and admiring each other and his first. Harry has been both betrayed and
    and amazed in sort of short order so I think he could use someone of his own that he can depend on and bounce things off of that would understand him.
    Report Review

  • From Leania07 on January 18, 2014
    Well it's been a while since I read it so I started over at the beginning. I loved the flirty bit, that was hysterical. Personally, I'd love for Draco to be his first, and the way that the Dark Ones sound, they don't go off on flings and such. Still enjoying this story, keep it coming ^.^

    Leania
    Report Review

  • From wherdatcomfrom on January 18, 2014
    I've come late to this story, so I hope my review comments will be helpful.

    I like your take on a "Dark" Harry, and wondered if you're going for a full gay, or possibly bi, take.

    If you want him to be totally gay, then by all means, give him some experience before he takes on the blond slyth.

    Or, perhaps you want Draco to be the knowing one.

    If he's to be bi, then maybe he'll have a girl or two to practice his sexual arts with. It can't hurt to be experienced when it comes to lovemaking, but only Draco can have his heart.

    Does any of this help??
    Report Review

  • From ANON - l on January 18, 2014
    I am loving this so far! Cannot wait for your next update! I do wonder if the Dark Ones will have Harry use a time-turner to train or something else. Oh, I would love to see Draco be Harry's first, I think that will create a stronger bond between them, which Harry will need with all the craziness he will be dealing with.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!