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Reviews for The Longest Road

By : WinterRaven
  • From on October 08, 2016

    Poor Severus.   I wish they would break down and talk to each other.  They both need closeness and caring they would get from each other.


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  • From jules3677 on September 14, 2013
    Oh please, you can't stop there. More. More. More.
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  • From ANON - KarenLioncourt on September 11, 2013
    *slightly dazed* Wow. This is beyond brilliant:)
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  • From ANON - Momoe on September 09, 2013
    I want more of this story!!! Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 09, 2013
    chapt 1-3: A winner of a story. But Draco is dead??? Oh no...I like Draco so much.
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  • From ANON - sara101 on September 09, 2013
    Why?! Why stop there?! Ugh you writers and your cliffies ~pouts~
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2013
    Ok. I get it. I'm not confused anymore. This is a smutty pwp. Plot holes are cute in lemons/pwp's. Who cares about broken ribs and why Harry dumpped Ginny when Snape' got Harry against a desk. :) From your story summary I was expecting a more serious Snarry romance. Plot holes aren't so cute in those types of stories. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2013
    Forgive me if my questions are answered in the next chapter. I don't get it. 1. Harry was caughing up blood. Ran to Snape, coughed up more blood, ran back up to Dumbledor's office, and didn't drink the healing potion. It dosn't take a doctoor to tell most people that a ruptured lung is life threatening. Most people bleeding from the lungs are in pain and have trouble breathing. 2. Snape didn't fulfill the unbreakable vow so he should be dead. 3. Harry took another beating and seem to be fine--at least healthy enough to run up to his doorm from the dongons to get a book (with an unhealed ruptured lung?) Is this an au or just a long pwp?
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 30, 2013
    Yowza! Looks like this is going to be an intense very hot story! atching for the next chapter alrady.
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