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By : sidvicious
  • From themusicjewel on June 27, 2015
    please know I have updated after 5 years! omg.

    http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600021603

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  • From ANON - Lyoness on September 27, 2013
    why is this sorted under Harry/Draco ? They both are in the hands of others with no way to be together. And both will be raped. So how can you even attempt to get them together?
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  • From ANON - Lori on September 08, 2013
    I laughed at Sera's review. Compared to other stories with mary/gary stus that people cheered on, this story should get an award.
    Ignore them, I think this fanfiction is rather interesting so far. Im curious to see more :)
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  • From RabidCreature on September 04, 2013
    I have to disagree with a previous review, the one that was mad about Ron's betrayal and lack of background. This is fanfiction for christsakes. Calm the f down. It's meant to be enjoyed if its decently written. And this was enjoyable. No need to get your panties in a twist about it. My only issue with it is some minor sentence structure issues and its short chapters. Overall, I'm interested to see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on September 03, 2013
    So I will give you that you know how to build up a scene but seriously? Betrayal in the first paragraph by his oldest friend? Complete face turn with absolutely no lead up, explanation or anything to carry suspension of disbelief? Its like you looked at the complete 7 books and just said SCREW THIS SHIT. The very core of the books is built up around Harrys friendships. You can't just suddenly make Ron an asshole and completely change his personality IN THE FIRST PARAGRAPH.This is just an insult to the fandom.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 03, 2013
    I'm out of this story. Catch your next one. I'll probably check in once in awhile to see if the story changes any.
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  • From magentah on August 31, 2013
    Definitely curious to read more and see where this is going. I'm sure some would argue that the plot, or what we know of it so far, has been done before, but frankly I can never get enough of it. :) Curious how it's going to go from where it is to Harry/Draco.. but willing to wait it out and see (plus, I never mind some Harry/Lucius). I feel bad for Draco and the position his father just put him in, but shamelessly am excited to see how Harry's training unfolds.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 30, 2013
    I don't know...might be a little too dark and angsty for me. I'll check out another chapter or two before deciding. It does sound like the characters will be a little different then they usually are. Never care much for Ron but very much so him being bad is kind of enlarging on how I think of him most of the time. Like Harry & Draco very much and get squiggy to think of them having sex with any one else if they are the pair in this story. If that has to happen please get them together quick please.
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