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Reviews for Chains of Fool's Gold

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on December 28, 2013
    about the end....

    Aww, is that it?

    It's been a long journey for the both of them, I have to say of all the characterizations of Harry & Draco,
    I liked this one the most. They felt more real to me.

    Also I had my favorite stories in this series, 'Working With Them', 'Evening Star', & 'The Library of Hades'.
    Anyway, good job on this monster of a series...and I bet you won't do this again. :-)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 26, 2013
    about #14...

    It's too bad, Draco would have made a great Head Auror and simply cleaned the place
    from the inside out...and by all means go ahead & use the name. :-)

    So I take it, this is it?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 06, 2013
    about #13...

    1. "Piss it out your ear,"
    - I like that. I think I'll use it to confuse some of my coworkers. :-D

    2. He gestured, and Harry leaned forwards from his own mare's back. Their lips met to a chorus
    of shocked gasps, shouts of outrage, laughter, and a few camera flashes
    -I KNEW once some idiot asked how they'd change, I was hoping you'd do something like that. :-)

    3. Individual lives are not necessarily expendable, but are not as precious.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 30, 2013
    about #12..

    Okay, I'm not sure if I mentioned this but..I really have the jury out on Hale.
    Me no trust.

    Just a few more to go, huh.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 20, 2013
    about 11..

    Yeah, this chapter did seem a little TOO calm, despite the screaming...until
    that little incident! Whoops there it is! :-)

    I guess the chaos shall commence?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 14, 2013
    I was just mentioning those things [dinner, flowers, etc..] in general, you make
    it sound like you would put them in one whole chapter...I hope not. No, courtship
    shouldn't be the same thing men have done over the years to the point just mentioning
    them make them sound clich
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 09, 2013
    about 9...

    Looking at this interaction between Harry & Draco, as well as in "Charming.., it
    makes me wonder when you get thru with both of these stories completely, have you ever
    thought about doing an old fashioned love story?

    I mean you could pull it off. I miss the stories on courtship..plain & simple. The wooing,
    the music, the slow dances, etc.. you get what I mean?

    Ever thought of that?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 30, 2013
    about #8..

    You know, I'm so used to the both of them being Aurors that it would be kind
    of sad to see the both of them leave their positions. They're really good at
    it.

    Besides what else could they do, you haven't exactly emphasized any other strengths they might have.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 26, 2013
    about #7...

    Question: what would the Draco of the past think & feel about this Draco
    of the future?

    ...and I don't know about anyone else but I would definitely give the both
    of them [Draco & Weasley] an Emmy, at least. They have me convinced. :-)

    When are we going to get to the Ministry?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 22, 2013
    about #6..

    WEll I, for one, can't wait to see this plan finally go into action. Are they
    still going to stage it for all to see?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 09, 2013
    about #5..

    Good ole Hagrid comes thru again. :-) I think I mentioned this a while back, but
    when this is all over, Harry & Draco are going to need a real vacation..seriously.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 03, 2013
    about #4..

    Yeah...even I gotta admit that was pretty good. :-/

    ...and maybe I have a sadistic sense of humor, but it WAS funny when Draco pushed
    Ron hard on purpose, under the pretense he was just 'looking after his welfare'. :-)
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  • From Christopher11 on October 02, 2013
    Actually, Hermione is right here..... there is always a way around using Unforgiveables if you look for it. The problem is that Harry and Malfoy have been on their own for so long that they have gotten into the thinking that they need to use those spells.

    A great story thus far.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 26, 2013
    Oh I thought it might foreshadow something like Draco being in peril soon.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 18, 2013
    #2...

    ..and now we get down to it! At this point I'm curious how you'll do
    this and what different strategy you'll bring to the table when it comes
    to the Ministry confrontation. By the way, who is the Minister?

    Are we foreshadowing with the Thestral?
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