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By : dweek
  • From ANON - red demon on October 06, 2013
    Love the new update. I also loved Tracy becoming a pet, she is not even really human to him anymore. Not sure about any kinks, but maybe we could see some chastity belt, orgasm denial, and making the girls dress slutty like short skirts (already started on Hermione though) lingerie, heels, costumes(French maid anyone).
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  • From ANON - Aranel on October 06, 2013
    Promises promises Potter. You better make her walk funny.
    Daphne and Tracy, there's an interesting pairing. Harry seems to be enjoying himself, hope he gets back to Hermione soon.
    I feel the story is going great, I still don't know how Harry plans to rebuild a country. Don't know what classes he's been taking at Hogwarts but I don't remember courses on management or budgeting or family and consumer science. Shit takes work...that's all I'm saying. It's just like the president job here in America, nobody really wants that job, but somebody has to do it.
    Check out Bitstream Charter! I love the Q and the Jj. So nice. Simple and striking at the same time.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 04, 2013
    Poor Daphne may be thinking above her station. But I am sure Harry will put her back in her place rather deviously *rubbing hands together*! I love the lessons from the slave to the slut!! I also like how Ginny is both frightened and excited about being used to gather allies to Harry's cause. And another Slytherian slut/slave is added to the ranks! More, Please!!!!
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  • From ANON - draconian on October 04, 2013
    i sure hope harry doesn't share hermione with snape or draco. i dont mind him learning their tricks by using daphne and ginny. but any dramione or snape/hermione stuff will put me off frm this story even though i am enjoying it right now. well such is the story of hhr fan. though adding narcissa and mrs.granger to his harem will be very hot
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  • From pfeil on October 04, 2013
    Very nice. I'm glad he's focusing, and it's not too easy.

    Interesting that he can already smell Longbottom in War Cardigan mode :) I like the idea of Harry arranging Luna for Neville.
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  • From ANON - Finally on October 04, 2013
    I just want to say, with complete and utter sincerity; "Thank you"

    It has been quite a while since there has been a fic in this section that starred Harry as the main character (and he's not gay) and is decently (or better) written. Lately it seems that if Harry is going to be mentioned in the summary it's right as the pairing and he's paired with Draco/Snape/some-random-guy and etc. Even though you mainly use Draco as your main guy, it's cool that you can come back and start a fic with Harry in the lead instead.

    Again, thank you.
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  • From ANON - Aranel on October 03, 2013
    Harry is very busy.
    I hope he does get his font right, that could make or break his regime. Can you imagine? Comic sans, everywhere...ugh...
    Loved what you did with Hermione! I could totally see her feeling that way, if darker pleasures were her things. Seeing herself in the house elves and becoming frightened by the mirrored image. Genius.
    Oh what will Tracy bring to the table, what fun.
    I hope you didn't think I was suggesting the PWP stories to you. I was offering them to anon since he had taken a wrong turn somewhere and ended up with some plot mixed in his smut. You do you boo boo, cause you do it great!
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  • From ANON - red demon on October 03, 2013
    That was awesome. Harry played Hermione like a fiddle. She was like a deer in the headlights. He's got Ginny wrapped around his little finger and Daphne is falling in line. Thanks for the scenes with Daphne I had be wanting to see her again.
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  • From ANON - Aranel on September 30, 2013
    Hmm, taking a turn. I wonder what Harry would do with the power and playing field that voldemort possesses. Honestly, do villains ever really think of how they will run the world after they take it over? There are mouthed to feed, regulations to be up in place and upheld, rebels (always rebels), currency depreciation, and higher ups to deal with all the time. Ugh and then there is the design! You have to pick a logo that represents your cause or self meaning. Then you must pick a color scheme, layout designs, stationary, fonts (homg fonts are so important!!), output, advertisements, spokes men, etc. (I'm a graphic designer, I think of these things)
    such hard work taking over the world. That's why I haven't done it. I guess if it was his plan to simply have a kingdom to rule in instead of countries, that might make more sense. Hmm.
    Kinda thrown by his distrust for good old Dumbiedorie(my mom's nickname for headmaster, just kinda stuck). Sure the old coot was up to some shinanigans but Harry knew that the headmaster loved him. I guess when you're taking over a regime, it's hard to trust people. i hope Draco comes around, Ginny would learn well from him. Lol what a funny polyamourous family they all would make under Harry's control.
    Can't wait for more Hermione and Harry time, sans the Draco interruptions. Haha! Harry gave her the silent treatment. What did I say! That shit always works. Damn annoying too! Nothing like a good strong hand though.

    As for disgruntled readers, haters gonna hate. This guy obviously needs something to wank to, there's a bit too much story line getting in between him and a good fix. Poor guy. If you really need a fix, I can suggest a few great stories. Nothing but da fucks. Rustle up your jimmies for you.
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  • From ANON - Lightner2000 on September 30, 2013
    really great story i really hope this doesn't turn into a dead story, and that you manage to complete all chapters.
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  • From ANON - red demon on September 29, 2013
    Ok first this is one of the best things I have read in a while. Second the treatment of Ginny is to awesome for words. It sounds like Harry is going to let Draco have at Ginny. Harry doesn't give me the impression that he is willing to share. I hope we see some more of Daphne soon or at this point any other girl. I can't wait to see what you have planed next.
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  • From Kain on September 29, 2013
    Harry is on a roll, training his girls, forming alliances, the boy is stepping his game up. Love the though that while he might be viewed as 'dark' by others he is not necessarily becoming evil. Manipulative and sexually promiscuous and ambitious but certainly not evil. He seems more or less grey, and while I don't see him trying to recruit the more evil death eaters like Bellatrix,Rodolphus, Fenrir(though this one would be interesting) ETC to his cause, I could see him making a play for the slightly more grey like minded wizards who haven't really committed any serious crimes.

    also ignore that asshole anon. The reviews speak for themselves and people are obviously enjoying what you are doing.
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  • From ANON - anon on September 29, 2013
    Was good until this chapter. Getting tired of Harry suddenly making friends with all his enemies for no other reason than the author liking those characters.

    Please just stick to the porn, that's what you're good at and that's why people read this site.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 29, 2013
    I loved that Ginny got rewarded for doing two things that Harry asked...what a good little slag. And the speech from Harry to Hermione was WONDERFUL *squirming in my chair*!!! Oh, I can see Draco coming over to Harry's (Dark Lord) side, very easily. The partial use of a Weasley can only ratchet ups Draco's interest. As we all know, a Weasley should always be beneath *growl* a Malfoy...especially when it is literally instead of figuratively! MORE, PLEASE!!!! p.s. I am really loving how Dark you are making Harry!
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  • From ANON - CUSPACECOWBOY on September 29, 2013
    Isn't Hermione going to be upset when she learns Harry is having sex with Ginny and other girls
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