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Reviews for Smell of Submission

By : dweek
  • From Kain on September 25, 2013
    Alas dear Aranel, it is fate that we continue to cross paths. Ours is an eternal dance formed through a shared love of all things awesomely written.
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  • From ANON - Aranel on September 24, 2013
    My authoritatively sexy Kain, we must stop meeting like this.
    Like I said, I ran off on a tangent. Got very sidetracked with how I usually view Hermione(naughty Hermione anyway). I agree with you, the Hermione in this story is exactly as you described her. And now the wee lamb has a sweet trigger phrase, one of my favorites actually.
    Loved the Dom assessment play between Snape and Harry, Snape did so well with knowing when to back off. Also loved how Harry handled the book issue like a boss. Hermione was so cute, still sticking to that bossy controlling nature of hers. Too bad that's gotta go...
    I never thought of it that way, but that could be a real good reason why lavender and Ron never really worked. Although I see Ron as a rather weak Dom... I wonder who Harry will pick to keep him busy after lav lav has run her course.
    Oh oh! Those fantasies of hers! What kind of fantasy did she have about Snape?! Dying to know. Harry sharing Hermione with Draco, is that impossible?
    There are so many possibilities with this story! Can't wait to see where you take it!
    Oh and yes, I was talking about the girl on the bus.
    Was I to spot Hermione's naughty fantasies or her controlling nature?
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  • From ANON - chm01 on September 24, 2013
    almost there.........
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 24, 2013
    Mmmmmm, what a WONDERFUL chapter. Naughty manipulation. I like that Harry has learned to keep his temper under control, as well as his sexual urges (especially with Hermione). I am sooo curious about Hermione's fantasies about Malfoy and Snape *fanning myself*. I hope they are very naughty and that Harry puts them to use on Hermione. She is sooo repressed, she need to give into her submissive side and enjoy life. Go, Harry...teach Hermione her place in this new world!!!! More, please.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 24, 2013
    'Chapter 3' I loved that Harry can 'play' with Hermione in the Great Hall. I hope that he makes her sit next to him as often (in classes and meals) as possible. Harry should be able to 'handle' her as much as possible. I also, LOVE that he keeps shortening her skirts and she hasn't noticed. But I am sure some of the other boys in school will enjoy the 'NEW VIEW' *evil snicker*. Alright *happy dance* Harry has his first Slytherian slut! Now, onto the next chapter *giggle*.
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  • From ANON - red demon on September 24, 2013
    Alright now we are getting somewhere. Now with Hermione accepting her place we can see Harry really moving things forward. I do hope we see so more of Daphne and some more humiliation. In fics where Harry is the Dom I never see he humiliating anyone its always the other way around. I wonder what other girls you add. I did like how Harry ended the fight between him and Hermione and got her to accept his orders.
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  • From Kain on September 24, 2013

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  • From ANON - Emily on September 24, 2013
    Great chapter :)
    How big is Harry? Above average :)
    Like the length of his wand. One of his future gurls cud say.."hmm i see your wand isnt the only thing (blank) inches long" lol
    Anyways awsome story
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  • From ANON - Aranel on September 23, 2013
    Oh man! Oh man oh man. Master Harry is on the scene!
    Such a naughty boy, spotting a broken slytherin babe and making her his for kicks and giggles. Oh Harry is a busy boy, keeping Ron busy, keeping Hermione focused on him, finding a delightful bit to eat with which to test his dominate abilities.
    I wish there had been a bit more information about the girl on the train, what was she all about? How did he feel about doing such a random thing with a random lady who he had never met. Sure he is a hormonal boy but his last experience was the most awkward thing. Tears and rebounds. Pink tea houses with little cupids. He isn't actually a natural Casanova. Has the strap brought out that in him as well or is Harry just a G?
    Oh Hermione, she isn't as dumb as she is. I think she knows her skirt is being shortened. But it's being basically forced upon her. She gets to still be called a good girl and experience such pleasures with such a powerful figure whom she can get lovely praises from. It's just so perfect for her! A chance to please and get praised and pleasure! She comes out at the end still very innocent, with big eyes she can say "he mad me do it", could even let a tear out. That crafty wench.
    Wow, I went on a tangent....I do love naughty Hermione. She has so many avenues she can venture down as an escape route and a means for which she could take everything to a whole other level. Crafty wench.
    Can't wait for more! It's going to be a wonderful journey.
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  • From ANON - chm01 on September 23, 2013
    first time I've seena submissive daphne, me likes
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  • From ANON - lordamnesia on September 23, 2013
    Very well done! I love this competent dark!Harry! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - red demon on September 23, 2013
    You are on a roll. That was a hot chapter. I loved the part when Harry started to feel up on Hermione under the table and on top of that he just took what he wanted from Daphne.
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  • From ANON - red demon on September 23, 2013
    Great update. Harry actually used his skull here. He kept a low profile and at the same time advanced things with Hermione. He also pushed her without pushing too hard. He didn't go to far just enough to get her used to doing the things he tells her to do. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ravenwing on September 23, 2013
    This a great rad hope you update soon, can't wait to see what comes next.
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  • From ANON - Aranel on September 23, 2013
    Hello new favorite story!! My old favorites have been rather busy, so BEHOLD! You now have Aranel reading your wonderful story.
    Where to start!
    I love Harry/Hermione stories! They rustle my jimmies something fierce! Love the two faced manipulative Harry, that guy has some real issues that never seemed to get addressed in most stories. I feel as though this story will give a lovely platform for dark Harry!
    Hermione's curiosity causing problems again. Love that the wand sheath is amplifying the Dom side of Harry. So nice! Haha, Ginny is a sub. Surprising. Maybe only a sub for Harry? She does rather worship him. Oh and that ever people pleasing nature Hermione is stuck with, oh the fun Harry will have with that.
    Very excited to see where you take this.
    I'm loyal, you'll see me with every post! Muh hahaha! Let the fun begin!
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