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Reviews for Smell of Submission

By : dweek
  • From ANON - red demon on August 10, 2014
    I loved the Harry and Tracy scene. I loved the chapter. Not much more to say except that Harry's plans seem to be moving forward.
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  • From ANON - chm01 on August 10, 2014
    so the collar is altering her personality! I wonder how many will take to have hermione take it off.
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  • From Maxtaf on July 30, 2014
    Since we don't have the ability to reply directly to another reviewer, I need to respond to what one of your previous reviewers, hugplx, said about Cormac and Harry behaving the same way. It's completely incorrect, and shows a lack of understanding of Dom/sub relationships. Being Dominant is not evil or wrong, nor is being submissive. They are two sides of the same coin, and each needs the other to be complete. What Harry is doing is being a dominant. He takes control of his submissives and their lives -- WITH THEIR CONSENT. He doesn't take any girl against her will, as shown by his willingness to let Hermione go. Cormac, on the other hand, used a mind control device on her -- WITHOUT her consent. What he did was no different from slipping a girl a roofie, or raping her. The difference is consent. All of Harry's girls are there of their own free will. There are two sides to their interactions: Harry dominates, the girls submit. Each party has agreed to how their relationship is to be. With Cormac, he stole Hermione's free will with the amulet. There was no sharing, there was no agreement - Hermione has made it clear she was not ready to accept that side of herself yet, and would not have agreed to wear the amulet had she known it's effects. (On the other hand, if Severus offered the same amulet to Ginny, and explained exactly what it was, she's probably accept with pride. But he likely wouldn't offer - it would cheapen the gift she's given him.)

    wildkitsune, I love the way you are making a distinction between Harry as a Master, and Cormac. Harry wants submission given freely, while Cormac isn't master enough to get the submission without mind control. While some might see Harry's gift as a form of mind control, all it really is is the ability to identify submissives more easily. Harry was willing to let Hermione walk away if that was what she truly wanted, where Cormac has enslaved her against her will. The contrast is wonderfully done, and really helps highlight the difference between a caring master and a selfish abuser, for those readers that don't understand the difference.

    I also like the interactions Harry has with his girls. I remember something I read once about the 'Platinum Rule'. The Golden Rule states that you should treat another the way you, yourself would prefer to be treated. The 'Platinum Rule' says that you should treat others the way THEY want to be treated. Your Harry obviously read the same book I did, because he lives it. I love the way he, Snape, and Draco, bargained for Ginny like she was a piece of parchment. Not so much because they needed to play that out, but because being treated that way meant a lot to Ginny. Beautifully done, and depicts your Severus as a caring master more than any other scene you've done.

    I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story. Thanks for writing, and for sharing it with us.

    Maxtaf
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2014
    One problem you have is that your lemons are too short and undetailed. It starts and ends in barely a few paragraphs.
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  • From Raven.Malfoy on July 28, 2014
    This has been a good piece of work. Is he going to ever just finally settle for having just Herimone or what?
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  • From ANON - Emmiey on July 28, 2014
    I like Tracey, she is a good character and well balanced. Daphne grates me but she is also growing on me. The Hermione focus is great, I hope she comes back in to the fold, orgasm denial makes a great punishment by the way ;)
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  • From ANON - hugplx on July 28, 2014
    ROFL

    Oh that's precious.

    Cormac does what Harry has been doing the whole fic and he's suddenly painted as evil.

    It actually made me smile. I'm not sure that you intentionally tried to make Harry look more like a hypocrite, but I thank you anyways for the laughs.
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  • From ANON - red demon on July 27, 2014
    Great update. Now that Ginny belongs to Snape I'm going to miss Harry's treatment of her. He doesn't even treat her like a person, I like it, well there is always Cho. It was pretty funny to see Ron as the voice of reason. Hope to see more of Harry with his girls next chapter. Can't wait.
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  • From ANON - chm01 on July 27, 2014
    I hope mine get back to she belongs soon.
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  • From ANON - d3mystic on July 27, 2014
    Couple of chapters for Harmony.... Hmmm.... So the necklace IS controlling her somewhat (or completely)... Nice chapter overall.
    I think Hermione will be crying a lot when this ends. Will Harry make her pay for the things she's done... I'm confused about one thing though. Is Hermione confused about her nature or she knows but is not accepting it?

    Next chapter sooner please..
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  • From ANON - Emmiey on July 18, 2014
    Great chapter. Looking forward to seeing how Hermione and Cormacs relationship develops and Snape and Ginny's .
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  • From Chrryb on July 14, 2014
    These new chapters make me so happy! and tingly inside. I feel like Hermione should be smart enough to realize that McLaggen is doing what he is doing? But I do love how this story is going. Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - chm01 on July 13, 2014
    Hermione has no idea what she's done when she allowed him to clasp that necklace does she? She just trapped herself with someone who is like Harry but meaner and harsher
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  • From ANON - red demon on July 13, 2014
    All I can say is HOT. I like your Harry he is definitely playing things cool. I loved the last scene with Ginny. I liked how Harry mentioned selling her. Harry should use that as a threat with is other girls, if they're bad he would sell them to a brothel or something.
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  • From djaddict on July 13, 2014
    I think Harry would be better off with someone who understands and appreciates him. He should just let Hermione go.
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