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By : dweek
  • From ANON - Emmiey on February 23, 2014
    You're back! With a great chapter as well! Looking forward to the next one, hopefully we'll see a bit of Treasure and Master action?
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  • From ANON - Luna/Wind on February 23, 2014
    So, just felt like saying that you made a good day great by releasing another chapter. This is easily my favorite fic on AFF, I'd top ten ongoing that I'm reading period. I can think of no negatives to say at all. I eagerly await future chapters, and thank you for writing it.
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  • From pfeil on January 03, 2014
    Oh shit. There's some serious punishment coming her way. I wonder what she'd think of Whip living up to her name in front of her?

    Good that the conversation happened, though. Once she comes around, she'll both have made progress to accepting her place and will be more useful as she can be involved in planning.
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  • From Matt01 on December 30, 2013
    Other then some minor spelling mistakes, you have writen one of the best books here.. And that is a rare thing to see here. The book in my opinion is a bit quirky, dark, unique and makes you think every step of the way. There is only a very small number of books that I would say are the best in the bussiness, but this book for me, has earnt it. The combo of this main book and your side story's, make for an interesting read. You dear lady, have done very well with this book and I tip my hat to you.
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  • From ANON - Emmiey on December 27, 2013
    What a great chapter! I sense Hermione has one huge punishment coming her way!! Please update as soon as you can!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2013
    outch...
    awesome chapter,
    continuuuuuuue,
    z.
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  • From ANON - chm01 on December 26, 2013
    I wonder how long will it take for hermione to go back to him?
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  • From ANON - zemfira on December 25, 2013
    I love your fic. And I am glad that Hermione start to struggle. And I hope she will be not punishment.
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  • From ANON - red demon on December 25, 2013
    Oh boy did Hermione forget that she's Harry's property. Methinks she is going to get punished big time. I'm guessing Harry forces her to fuck one of his girls.
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  • From ANON - Hilarity on December 25, 2013
    My problem with this fic is that Harry is doing all the work breaking in the girls and learning the trade himself and other guys are just benefitting and only giving Harry their word that they'll support him. I mean, where is his control of the guys? And I don't mean sexually. Why is he even taking an inch of bullshit from Ron, who has his own slave yet can be outraged at Harry/Hermione. Is he going to "catch" cho/Snape in the act and blackmail? How the hell is Cho going to seduce that ashley anyway, no way he'd give into that. When are Draco and Blaise going to fully realize who is runnin things? Reiteration: Harry is doing all the work while others simply benefit.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on December 25, 2013
    First, what con are you going to? Second, thank you for your emails inquiring about my novel...BTW I am in the process of editing it (Ugh :|). Third, a chapter (actually two) for Christmas, Yippy!?!?! I like that Ron now has his own slave and that Luna is so receptive. Poor Hermione...she needs to listen and learn were her place in the hierarchy. Only then will she understand what her name truly means to Harry. But she is in for a BIG punishment, she might not be able to sit for a week...at least. Happy Holidays and I hope you can post sooner. But either way...I will wait!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - tinkerbabe7 on December 24, 2013
    O.O
    Can't say I didn't expect that reaction from Hermione when she found out about Harry's other girls. I wonder what Harry will do now... He's obviously going to be mad about getting hit, but did it think it would not happen? Ughhhh I can't wait for your next post on here. I wanna know what happens next!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - hotflower901 on December 24, 2013
    Harry had to see that coming.
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  • From ANON - walters1 on December 10, 2013
    Really good story! But please update soon! It's been ages!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on December 01, 2013
    Excellent plot chapter. I love the little innuendos that Harry said to Ron, but were intended for Hermione. I also, think that Cho will LOVE being a submissive to Snape. I know I would!! More, Please!!
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