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By : dweek
  • From Eclectic_Pet on November 03, 2013
    Oh, I do love plot twists (even if there is no sex involved in the chapter *giggle*). I like that Harry wants to help Neville gain more confidence. Cho needs to watch her tongue...actually she needs to put it to better use; like on Neville *evil laugh*!!! I am glad that Mr. D and Mr. M are moving in the right direction, and of course with open use of Fuck Toy as a bonus. I absolutely loved the scene in the store. Poor Vixen, she will need to be punished before she can be rewarded. But I think this store owner and her wares *ROFL* will help Harry with that. BTW, I am ahead on my writing and I had to sneak over here for a quick peak. So I am reading this chapter and your side chapter as my reward!!!!! It is a win-win, I get rewarded with a chapter and you get another review!
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  • From ANON - red demon on November 03, 2013
    Alright now this was a great chapter. I just love how Harry holds court, all his girls naked, on their knees, and looking at the ground. I especially loved the sex shop scene. I thought Harry was going to take Hermione there and show her the stuff he was going to use on her, but it work just as well with Tracy there. I liked how Harry and the owner were talking about Tracy like she wasn't even there. I get the feeling that the Dominatrix is going to recommend that the best tool for a slave that forgets her place is a switch (cane). I can't wait to see what you are going to have Harry buy for use on his girls.
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  • From ANON - jhh on November 03, 2013
    Hi again!!!

    Wow! I don't know how to tell you in word how I love this chapter!!! I knew it was going to be worth the wait, and Harry knew it too. Firstly because deep down Harry knows that Hermione is his one true love, and because of that Harry has being going with Hermione step by step, so they could enjoy their first time together the best they could.

    I'm really looking forward to see how Hermione now fits with Harry and his other girls.

    Again thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - jhh on November 03, 2013
    Hi again!!!

    This was an interesting chapter!!! I'm curious of the aproach of Harry using his girls to gather allies as Draco.

    Oh! And I would be great that Luna would become Ron's girl.

    Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!


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  • From ANON - jhh on November 03, 2013
    Hi again!!!

    I really enjoy this chapter. First I really love the interaction of Cho with the rest of girls, I love how sweet and caring Harry is being with her and the rest of the girls.

    And the last part when Harry talks to Hermione about her feelings it was so sweet. I love that Harry is giving Hermione all the time she news to acepts her innner feeling and desires.

    Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!
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  • From pfeil on October 27, 2013
    Thanks for concentrating on Harry and Hermione. Splitting off the side stories is a good way to go about it. I'm glad he got to fully claim his treasure :)
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  • From ANON - red demon on October 27, 2013
    Great update. Harry and Hermione had their big night. I loved the part when Harry told her that his rules are the only rules that matter and the part when he asked who she belonged to. I also loved her new nick name.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 26, 2013
    OH *melting into a puddle of goo in my chair*! That was WONDERFUL, MARVELOUS!!! I almost fell off my chair when Harry told Hermione that he was going to put her in charge of 'panting and moaning'...and I think she did an AMAZING job of it too!!!!! More, more, more...PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2013
    good, but I hope luna become ron slave it get tireing reading about harry getting all the girl ron should get one or two,
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 24, 2013
    Oh, I love that Draco brought a friend and as soon as I finish this review, I am running over to read the chapter about the threesome *rubbing hands together*!!! I like that Ron needs Hermione's help to get started with Luna. And I LOVED the two comments by Hermione and then Harry about being bossy and knowing what one wants. That was great! As always...More, Please!!!!
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  • From ANON - red demon on October 23, 2013
    It's nice to see some updates. Chapter was great, Harry really is in command. I hope we see more of him and his girls in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Aranel on October 23, 2013
    I feel cheated. There was a Draco/Ginny/Blaise sandwich and I didn't get to see how the night went!! I'm beside myself. I can't...
    Oooooh? What's this here? Snape has been forgiven and doesn't want to talk about it? Why do I feel that dumbeldore is a part of why he doesn't want to talk right now?
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  • From ANON - hugplx on October 23, 2013
    Youwot? You've been leading up to the Ginny/x scene for several chapters now and you don't even go into it? What's the point of a smut story that passes over the smut? Just because Harry's not involved doesn't make it any less interesting...
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  • From ANON - knightowl on October 23, 2013
    You need to atleast write what happens to Ginny in offshot chapters for this when Harry's Whore are being used when He not around.A Side-story of them.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 16, 2013
    I DO like the revised chapter. I even like Ginny's revised name. I also enjoyed the fact that now Hermione has to 'think' about her feelings and analyze whether they are her own or social pressure. BTW, (ROFL) about the three hours NOT spent on a spreadsheet of Doms and Subs!?!?!?!?! My master would tell me that sounds like something I would do *hang head*! I am also thrilled with your Blog. As always...More, Please!!!!!!!!!!
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