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Reviews for The Problem With War

By : scarletladyy
  • From ANON - eJs on February 23, 2016
    Heartbreaking
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  • From RykOakwine on October 05, 2015
    The premise has potential. But the story falls short of its promise.

    The technical writing has issues. Several typos and misspelling.

    The sexual aspects are under-done. The characterizations are difficult to buy into. George, Fred, and Ron torturing a young woman to death for daring to have a brief lez affair with Ginny back in school?

    Again, the premise has potential. Maybe another swing at it, author?

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