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Reviews for The Werewolf

By : chedevy
  • From ANON - tbhjustAlice on November 23, 2015
    Alice st I love this!!! I mean this is so fucking original, so great job!!!!! Every detail you put in the fic is fantastic, I really really really really love this fic , really.
    Second please please please please I beg you!!!! Update this story !!!!! This fresh story is really great!!!! So please!!!!!


    And for last, thank u for creating a story with a new and refreshing twist


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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on August 12, 2014
    Why you no update? This really is an amazing story and so detailed. Do you have any other works on different sites? I would love to read more of your stuff, not to mention the rest of this awesome fic.
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  • From ANON - Blondie on April 18, 2014
    I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon.
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  • From EndlessDarkDramoieneDesire on December 09, 2013
    Very good chapter,loved it.. Please Update Soon!
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  • From ANON - Victoria on December 09, 2013
    I am enjoying this story very much. Your description of Draco's first transformation into a werewolf was beautifully detailed. (Forgive me for not pausing to review after that chapter, but I was too engrossed in the story to stop reading just then.) Your depiction of Draco's heightened senses is captivating to read and his gradual acceptance of his wolflike habits and nature is fascinating. Now there's the added twist of his attraction to Hermione's scent. That aspect of the story is sensual as well as suspenseful. I can't wait to see what will happen next....By the way, isn't the new DADA teacher--Worple-- a vampire? A vampire friend who turned up at one of Slughorn's Slug Club parties, wasn't he? If Worple is indeed the vampire I remember, that should be interesting as the ancient feud between vampires and werewolves will likely be a problem for Draco in Worple's class.
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  • From EndlessDarkDramoieneDesire on November 28, 2013
    Amazing,superb chapter.. Dying for the next chapter.. Please Update Soon Dear.... :)
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  • From Kain on November 19, 2013
    Welcome back.


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  • From Trelweny on November 03, 2013
    I'd love to read about the trial and afterwards from Draco's PoV. Especially why he was speaking as he did at the start and what he scented from Hermione after.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From Kain on November 02, 2013
    Welcome back, was wondering when this would update lol.

    Laughed at how Draco thought he had gotten off scott free only to be hit with hi new punishments. Harry said it bet, he may not be Azkaban material, but he does deserve some kind of punishment. Will be interesting too see just how long he can keep his secret.

    Now Lucius, that is a whole different thing entirely. I find it odd that he got such a light sentence considering he was a very active Death Eater in both wars, was one of Voldemort's highest supporters, more than likely has a decently high body/torture count, and isn't even going to finish hi previous sentence from when he was captured after the battle in the ministry, where he threatened to murder children.

    Now the next part I am going to type down is actually from another review from a different story in regards to Lucius:

    "you do NOT get points for switching sides like an hour before the battle is done after a lifetime of villainy. Loving you children while still committing evil is not an excuse that absolves you of all wrongdoing. Prior to his screw up and falling out of favor, Lucius was quite happy too do whatever his master said with a skip in a step. Hell, why would he even be getting a trial, seeing as how he never finished serving his first sentence after the battle in the ministry where his true allegiances were revealed. The man was an active Death Eater in 2 wars and more than likely a mass murderer/torturer as well. He almost got an 11 year old girl killed in her first year of Hogwarts all because he wanted to get rid of any incriminating evidence and tried to kill harry when he lost him his house elf. At the manor while Draco was hesitant to name any of the trios names, Lucius was trying to goad his don into revealing who they were all so they could get back there old standing despite knowing what the Dark lord would have done to Harry,Hermione and Ron and the other prisoners he had in his cellar."

    It always vexed me in Canon that Lucius got off Scott free, Narcissa can be given 'some' leeway for helping harry in the end to a certain extent, but while she might not have been a true Death eater herself, she sat in during some of their meetings, knew EXACTLY what her husband was doing and did nothing, and helped keep prisoners in her dungeon and sat by while Hermione was tortured by her sister only a few feet away.

    I mean after all that he only gets a year?

    -Okay, rant over now back to the true review-

    It will be interesting to see how not only Draco but the other returning Slytherin students adjust to school.They were undoubtedly at the top of the food chain for the year that the death eaters ran the school and while they already had a bad rep before this, they will have to grow eyes in the back of their heads, since they will now have a massive target on all of their backs. That house is going to carry an even worse Stigma than before and with public opinion of them at an all time low and many of their parents suspected of Death Eater activities, they are going to have to tread lightly and look out for other students looking for payback.

    -waits patiently for the next chapter-
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  • From ANON - Thistle on October 16, 2013
    I want you to know that I love the way you write Draco. I check back often to see if you've updated because this is one of those stories that has just immediately caught my attention. Never considered myself a werewolf fan (was always more of a vamp supporter) but I think that this story holds a lot of promise and I am looking forward to seeing where everything goes!
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  • From ANON - Missus_G on October 10, 2013
    I quite enjoyed that, thanks! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 28, 2013
    This is a really good start!!! I can not wait for your next chapter.
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  • From Kain on September 24, 2013
    Very nice start. Guess Draco will have to experience what life is like for those he used to look down on andd can no longer boast about his blood. I like how you made it clear that despite being a bully and a colossal jerkass, Draco is by no means a killer and it was obviously hurting him to even torture the poor women. Will be interesting to see how he grows close to Hermione and how the trio will respond to him. One request though is that Ron not be made the bad guy just to make Draco look good. It occurs in quite a few Dramione fics and I am under the firm belief that any pairing can work without vilifying an established good character.

    -waits patiently for the next chapter-
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