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By : BurningNebula
  • From Tamafluff on February 22, 2021

    Love this story! Any updates coming soon?


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  • From dead-angels-command on March 11, 2017

    I absolutely adore this story! Please update soon!


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  • From ANON - lizzy on March 17, 2016
    Please update this story.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 26, 2014
    What a sad story so far. I hope you continue this story. I also hope Severus comes back into it. Last I read Harry had burst into Severus's home & Sev had done drugs again just as Harry had done. After both starting to clean up I can't believe they did that. Maybe they could each be each others sponsor or find one.
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  • From ANON - SesshKagFab on February 19, 2014
    I am so happy you are writing this story again. I love the last flashback chapter you did to show us first hand that Harry has been through this unrelenting side of addiction as well. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From dantae on February 15, 2014
    I am extremely confused. You left us with a cliff hanger in 6 and picked up with something totally unrelated in 7.
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  • From DiamondFloodedDemons on January 19, 2014
    I think being able to see what Harry has to deal with behind the Snape scenes is a good thing to put in there. Just so we dont always see him as such a calm and collected individual. You expressed his inner battle with "to do or not to do" quite nicely. This story actually caught my attention because I used to be pretty bad into drugs, and the way you write the shooting up scene was very realistic. As a parent though, I'm pretty sad that he did it, instead of letting teddy be his reason not to. Still loving the story, regardless! I hope to see what happened with Severus in chapter six soon. Maybe the two of them will get together and maybe Severus will fall in love with teddy too :)
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on January 16, 2014
    Chapter 4, okay, nice detail about the research but I was absolutly blown away by the fact that Snape told HERMIONE that Harry was the light he needed in his life. WOW. I mean no inner turmoil at that realisation, no horror at revealing something so personal ? I miss Snapes inner turmoil :/
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on January 16, 2014
    So, chapter 3...its not bad. The story is moving along nicely, well paced, good descriptions but...but...I miss my snarky, bitter potions master who hates the world and spits venom at small children. What happened to him? Did he become mellow through heroin? I know he is suddenly seeing Harry in a new light but wheres the acidic and dry whit that we all know and love? Who is this man that is moved when Harry says he wants to give them both direction instead of snearing and pulling up his tough guy shell and maybe MAYBE being a tiny bit moved in his heart of hearts? I'm sorry but your Snape is just to nice XD
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on January 16, 2014
    Just finished the 2nd chapter. Its a good idea with a fresh look at this couple. Love that I have not read this before. However the whole Detox in a few hours was a big pill to swallow. I do hope you realize that drug addiction is only for a very small part about taking the actual drug. As you pointed out its about numbness and escape. If Sev has really been addicted for so many years do you really think that after 1 potion and meeting Harry he is gonna give up? Seems kind of shallow :/ Addiction is highly psychological. Its really, really hard. Even if you take away the psychsical pain you still have the mental anguish which is so much more. It would have been so much more convincing if, after the first night back in his own bed he would have been reading up on the poppys and then started thinking about heroin again. Even as he tries to focus, the thought of the drug slowly invading his mind...I do feel like the druggie bit was just a throw away plot point that you only needed for the two of them to meet.But I digress, will get back to you after I have read the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - maethoriell on January 13, 2014
    Thanks for writing!
    I'm curious to see where this goes, and unlike many fics I didn't really notice any grammar issues.
    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Amber on January 13, 2014
    Ohhhh my goodness!! Thank you so very much for updating!! I am absolutely loving this! I cannot wait to see what Harry does with Severus!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! :-)
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  • From magentah on January 11, 2014
    Loving this so far! Not sure how five chapters made it by without my notice, because I love a good HPSS story that portrays them as a little more human than most. Still strong wizards capable of greatness and glory, certainly, but not infallible for all that. Anyway, thanks for sharing! Looking forward to the next update. I'll be adding this to my WIPs bookmark folder. :) Now I'll just keep my fingers crossed for a bottom!Harry should it get to that point! Haha.
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  • From ANON - delia carrano on January 10, 2014
    Oh wow!!! Why couoldn't Severus been more open with Harry about wanting to stay & wanting some sor of relationship or at least needing something but not knowing what? And why didn't Harry come over sooner than about 2 weeks??? Yes I'm frustrated! I love these two and I'm an old school kind of person who just wants to smack both of them even if I understand that after the end of the world as they had been living it for most of their lives they were left hanging with no one to help or understand. (Granger had Ronand Weasleys had deaths to think about. Neither Sev or Harry were on the front of any ones radar in a helpful way.
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  • From DiamondFloodedDemons on January 10, 2014
    Ahhh no, he relapsed. :( I hope Harry doesn't get too pissed off about it. It's sad though that Severus sank back in it because of a joke Harry tried to make a little fun out of. But I can definitely see how something so small could cause huge waves like that in someone's head. Even if the other person is totally unaware of what they've spurred on.

    I hope he is able to tell Harry why he feels the way he does. Not just the fact of his joke putting him back in such a dark place in his mind, but all of it.

    So glad you decided to update as well! I look for your story whenever I come on. Thanks for yet another very interesting chapter! Hope to read more soon XD
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