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Reviews for Black Phoenix

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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 18, 2014
    about #25..

    Just throw a few Death Eaters Persephone's way..and all will be well.
    Seriously though...what about those who are on Deathrow/Azkaban? Couldn't she have
    those bodies once they are dead?
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  • From BAFan on March 14, 2014
    Ch. 24

    Whoa.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on March 13, 2014
    Uh oh! Harry is a real quandary now. How is supposed to feed human flesh to Persephone, live flesh at that, and still maintain bothnhis sanity and the goodness that lives in his heart. He would begin to become a true "Dark" Lord if he starts feeding her people just to keep her alive! Nothing good can come of it and it makes me wonder if Gorenson somehow knew!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Christopher11 on March 13, 2014
    Oh poop... so Harry now finds out that he is basically going to have to do human sacrifices to keep Persephone alive? That is going to be exceptionally hard on him and I wonder how he is going to get around that problem.

    A great new chapter to the story and I'm anxiously awaiting Harry's solution to this dilemma.
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  • From Ciara_D on March 09, 2014
    Really enjoying this one, for the political drama and for the powerful Dark Lord Harry part. Thank you for continuing to update!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on March 09, 2014
    uh oh, Gorenson is back t it again! It's a little scary just how much power this man seems to hold and the fact that no one really knows who he truly is! For both Rosenthal and Draco are this nervous, we should be even more so.

    ~~ Meechya
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  • From Christopher11 on March 09, 2014
    Sounds like Gorenson is a 'True Dark Lord' behind the scenes, cloaking himself in 'the Light' but actually being just as evil as Voldemort was.
    A great new chapter to the story. I don't usually like yaoi stories but this one is good enough to make me overlook my usual aversion to them.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 07, 2014
    about #22..

    It sounds like they're growing...a tree. O_o
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on March 03, 2014
    The Veela are certainly a distrustful group. The one thing Harry can't stand is someone lying to him and keep their secrets until they think someone else needs to know. Dumbledore biggest flaws! Should be interesting to see what happens. I can't wait until hary figures out The real reason for Persephone's change.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2014
    i normally review on ff, but it's being a cow atm. (that and i've lost my password for aff. >.>) wow, sephy really has done a 180 personality was. after the hostility she had first off, no wonder har is twitchy.
    i agree with draco. chaos and misfortune to their enemies... with a special Rita twist. mwhahaha.
    Veela huh. goodness, hogwarts is become practically a magical creature/being reserve.
    can har extend hogwarts main 'body' to create extra room/ quarters as needed (making hogwarts larger) or is he limited to changing things about in the current castle plan.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 27, 2014
    ....do they really seek sanctuary if they were trying to control Harry with their allure? Or was that an unconscious blast of allure bc there were so many of then?

    hmmm great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on February 27, 2014
    Draco is successfully sowing the seeds of discontent through his use of Rita to make sure that she starts looking into the things he wants exposed. He really is a master at politics. Tough I love the new and moreover Persephone, I too, like Harry find it somewhat disconcerting as to what changed her attitude so drastically. Yes she was captured along with Harry but after escaping I would think she would be more bent on a birds style revenge. The only theory I have on her about face is that she realized Harry expended a good portion of her magic just to make sure she escaped even if he might not and because of that she truly bonded like a standard Phoenix and was reborn from the "ashes".

    ~~ Meechy.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on February 21, 2014
    Harry's learning that he can't jump into every situation by the seat of his pants and expect his followers to all be happy. Draco expressed his point far better than Greenbush and Harry is more apt to listen to Draco anyway.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - minieegold on February 19, 2014
    Thank you for new chapter,I love this story so much💕
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 16, 2014
    about #19..

    Well that was an interesting interlude. O_O
    Maybe the werewolf will see Harry as an alpha before the
    night is thru, but this was different...and good to see Hermione
    wasn't her usual annoying self.
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