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Reviews for Black Phoenix

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  • From BAFan on October 20, 2013
    Ch. 4

    Is the Wizengamut made up of complete imbeciles??
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  • From Genuka on October 20, 2013
    The companion was a good idea. Are they bound together or are they completely separate?
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  • From BAFan on October 17, 2013
    Ch. 4

    Oh yes. That was perfect! Now I can't wait to see what you come up with to spoil their afterglow. It may not be immediately, but it will happen, I have no doubt.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo64 on October 15, 2013
    Oh my goodness! I think I need a cigarette or a cold shower after that! I love how Harry tantalized Draco both with sex and magic!!

    They really are a great pair together.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 15, 2013
    about #4...

    Oh my GAAAWWD! Stop with the mentioning of the 's' word! I'd rather take a severed head
    than that!

    annnnd yes my dear you came thru finally! This was deliciously hot, thorough, AND a long
    time coming. :-)

    I was starting to believe you lost that touch of yours. Seriously...since most of your sex scenes
    have entered the PG rating. :-p Well they have!

    There's nothing else to gush about, soooo...see you next time!
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  • From Genuka on October 13, 2013
    *cackle* He's finally completing his claim on Draco. :D
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 12, 2013
    about #3...

    Yes, gosh darnit...there's nothing like eating a bowl of cereal, when all of a
    sudden the author decides to give you an imagery of flying snot. Thanks a lot! *thumbs up*
    Every story I've read, I don't eat...decide to eat during this one, get wonderful visuals.

    ANYway, this was a nice interlude between them, tho' I miss reading your ACTUAL description
    of.....physical contact between the two. I must be the only one here who realizes you actually
    went beyond the call of duty at one point in another life.

    ANYway, I like the addition of Persephone she adds a certain dynamic...and I can tell you like birds
    more than cats.
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  • From BAFan on October 12, 2013
    Ch. 2


    "Persephone looked at him smugly, and lifted her tail to perform an even less pleasant operation down his back."

    ROFL! Don't know why I didn't review this chapter when it was posted. *scratching head* Anyway, I felt absolute kinship with Harry when he was talking to the centaurs, 'cause I had no frigging idea what they were talking about either. Seems as if Persephone is going to be the devil on Harry's shoulder. Should be interesting.
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  • From BAFan on October 12, 2013
    Ch. 3


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2013
    once again har has bitten off more than he can chew... eh, at least he has the power to back it this time. (centaurs and merefolk and phoniex s OH MY!)
    well, Sephie the phoenix is a sort of anti moral guide... if she thinks it's a good idea in the crush, kill, destroy front, it's probably time to take a step back and re examine things.
    tis a pity mio couldn't hack things. a chance to study sephie and any references to a black phoenix would have probably sent her it wiggles of delight. i bet the unspeakables are drooling to get a look at her.
    i wonder just how many critters are going to make their way to har's banner.
    i read somewhere once that someone challenged a Shaman with 'are you a shaman or a showman,' to which the shaman said 'yes.'
    you got to be a bit of both to make it work. Har's just putting a Snark Lordly twist on the idea.
    this is so much fun. screw dark lords... I'll take a Snark Lord any day.
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  • From CareLessLover on October 11, 2013
    Sexy time? I hopes? I'm loving these prequels! 'Easy As Falling' was great, but---in my personal opinion---I do believe 'Black Phoenix' is going to be better!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 08, 2013
    about #2..

    WEll, glad that meeting went good somewhat. :-/ I can see Persephone is going to
    be a little bugger...and she gave knew meaning of 'let the bird of paradise rain
    sunshine on you', I'm paraphrasing.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on October 08, 2013
    Yay I am back om track with harry the snarky dark lord and i love it!

    You are a most wonderful writer and i adore your work.

    The centaurs does not seem completely appeased yet so i wonder how that will play out...
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 02, 2013
    Things are finally taking off.

    SO, you DID have plans for a familiar or it hadn't occurred until recently?
    All in all, I figured why WOULDN'T he have one, a familiar can be convenient
    at times...and I like that you decided to give a different kind of phoenix...*sigh*
    I still think a kitten would have been nice. :-P
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  • From ANON - ^_^ on October 01, 2013
    I love this series. lol.
    I love the way Harry carries himself and how he goes about trying to bet the ministry.
    I will probably enjoy this sequel also. Until next update.
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