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Reviews for Passing Notes in Snape's Class

By : tbird1965
  • From Trillvia on April 17, 2019

    I'm so sad you're not posting anymore stories. You are one of my top 3 favorite erotic writers ever. :(


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  • From JadedFate on February 08, 2017

    Very good story. I love all the playful banter! It was easy to see everything actually happening. You kept snapes personality and added to it. I loved his tender moments with Hermione, and his blatant answers with her friends. Looking forward to reading your other stories!


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  • From JadedFate on February 08, 2017

    Finished chapter three. The word"special" was used twice here that just shouldn't have been. "She touches herself in that special place" and at the end where Snape asks, "yes, but was it special?" Those just don't fit well. Other than that, looking forward to more chapters. It's a good story.


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  • From ANON - Fox on April 20, 2016
    My Dear Author,
    Thank you for this story. I must say I liked it a lot, so much in fact, that I was re-reading my favorite bits as I went. I loved the humor and their teasing, I loved sex scenes too -of course. The idea about teacher's bathroom was amazing, very fitting, I mean why shouldn't it exist? It totally should! Headmaster....freaked me out a tiny little bit, but it was very funny and pervy(it's not a bad thing, really...)
    I just wish it wasn't so fast paced, I wished there was a little more back story and more build-up. Still I'm jealous of Hermione, I want that particular Potions Master all to myself! Especially, when he's so passionate and lovely and so lickable/edible/fuckable...mmm
    Thank you
    Fox
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  • From ANON - Fox on April 20, 2016
    I just finished chapter 8. I do love it a lot. It's very fast and it seems as if it all happened within 48 hours or less. Admitting love was a little too much too soon, but it's all very romantic :-)))))
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  • From ANON - Fox on April 20, 2016
    Hi,
    Wanted to let you know, that I find your story very exciting and sexy. I just finished chapter 3 and their sex scene is fulfilling, but I have 1 anatomical comment -a complaint actually. Hymen (or a barrier, as you called it) is at the opening of vagina and can be seen after parting labia, so Severus wouldn't push head of his penis and feel the barrier inside. Also just to add, the pain during the first time doesn't come just from tearing hymen, but from stretching the vaginal muscles too.
    Apart from that, I really wish I could be that virgin in bed with Severus instead of Hermione...
    Thank you
    Fox
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  • From Lizski on June 20, 2014
    Great fun! Thanks for the entertainment!
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  • From Annecia89 on May 01, 2014
    Absolutely loved the story!! It was really written in a way that could actually have occurred!
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  • From dweek on April 26, 2014
    I really like how your story began and ended the same way.
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  • From ANON - Mari on January 25, 2014
    I love this so so much. More please? Even though i prefer the more mystical snape than the snape that is so open about everything, i really enjoy this story. Keep going! (+++++)
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  • From ANON - love it on January 10, 2014
    Please for all of us keep going!!!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 03, 2013
    That was lovely and wonderful and I wish I had a potions master of my very own. Sigh... Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2013
    post more soon!! its great :)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 10, 2013
    I am glad Harry was a good enough friend to accept her choice. And, I em enjoying the start of their date. :-) I look forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From BAFan on November 04, 2013
    Ch. 6

    I first thought that this was going to be PWP, but it has turned into a surprisingly sweet story. Completely OOC, of course, but who cares? I loved Severus helping her with that potion, but it's hard to imagine Fred and George selling anything as benign as a Mani/Pedi potion. Wouldn't they want it to, I don't know, turn fingernails into claws ir something? *g*

    It's also been a pleasure reading something so well-written. You actually know that the past tense of "lead" is "led." *gasp* I only spotted one typo, back in Chapter 4:

    "They lay together, talking quietly. Hermione was shocked to discover how affection Professor Snape was; as they spoke he never stopped rubbing her back or touching her arms."

    Should be "affectionate." Looking forward to the next update!
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