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Reviews for Fragmented Soul

By : StrawberryGirl87 & Bickymonster
  • From ANON - Dark_Soul on October 26, 2013
    Fenrir unconcious, nothing can hurt him!! Finally Harry understands where he truly belongs, especilly with the fucking coniving coot around to fuck things up! Abraxus Cygnus REALLY!? I don't understand how 'strays' could corner HARRY BLOODY POTTER, where was his wand, his intelligence that has been pointed out so much in this story, yet he almost gets his fucking BALLS CUT OFF. PLease explain that. And where is Nagini, surely your not going to just replace her with the Basilisk. And speaking of the basilisk, curled around a chair!? the damn things sixty feet long! honestly, great writing but these things need to be addressed
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on October 23, 2013
    Great story! I really enjoyed the depth and scope of the story and the different characters( even the OC's). I really love Sev in this story and it broke my heart when Sirius hurt him and broke all of Harrys child hood stuff. How can he be so blind? Sev clearly took great care of Harry!! Why is Siri so blinded by his hate :'( I hope you can find somebody for Sev in this story at the end too...and that Siri gets a good kick in the head for everything he has done. And feels ALOT of guilt when he finds out the truth. I was a teeny bit annoyed that you built Harry up to be this awesome , amazing protege with amazing abilitys and such. One of the things we like best about Harry is that he is so relatable because he is so normal at least in most things. He does well at the one thing but is crap at the other. He doesn't like sitting still and he's no Hermione Granger ( btw how did she survive the troll without Harry?). Other then that I'm not quite sure what to make of Fenrir, this is only the 2nd of the pairing that I am reading and really I have always thought of him as an evil, sadistic bastard. I will give his character some leaway for his fallen pack but I have to question if you are going to mention at all that he was the one that infected Remus? Apparently for no other reason then for the lulz. and he is known far and wide as having killed and infected humans...eh, I'm just happy that Harry is showing some resistance and doesn't just drop trow and get up the duff within the first few chapters -_-. Its nice that he has a personality that is beyond his "inner werewolf" and that he is not exactly crazy about Fenrir at this point. They still have a way to go after all. And which 15 year old realistically WANTS to be pregnant at the age of 16 or 17 ??? Harry has seen nothing of the world and it would be nice if, once things are over he does a bit of reflection before he makes his final choice. Finally I am curious to know..what exactly does teh Pack DO all day?? I mean from what I can tell Harry did ALOT of studying back when he was with Sev and now he...hides behind a tree? Isn't that exremly boring to a mind that is used to studying intensly for days? and teh rest of the pack? I get that Fenrir sometimes does odd jobs(?) and the others hunt but does that take up the whole day??Do they just nap most of the day? Callie cooks and...thats it? I guess sometimes they go and buy stuff to eat(?) as you did mention veggies but I guess they have cooling charms and freshness charms on that stuff? Same as medicine? Did I miss that bit? the newest wolf had a job and an independant lifestyle but now he always seems to be with the pack? anyway, good story, looking forward to more!
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  • From LeVeen on October 23, 2013
    wow! another chapter! I love this story so much!! And Fen/harry is one of my favorite pairings! Pleaaaaaaase update this weekend!! Pleaaaaaaaaase!
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  • From ANON - Guest on October 13, 2013
    Oh noo poor harry!! I hope Severus makes a great daddy! Please update soon!!
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