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Reviews for Fragmented Soul

By : StrawberryGirl87 & Bickymonster
  • From ANON - Dharma on July 30, 2014
    I've been waiting for Clayton to feel like he doesn't belong and leave...is that where his story is heading?
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  • From ANON - dragonstar01 on July 30, 2014
    I love that they've got their little forest almost ready! I love that Harry's finally being honest with them, so hopefully they can beat Dumbles and Voldie and head back to the clearing!!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 25, 2014
    The chapter was a good time...pure fun. I enjoyed the comment reply to a reader at the end also. Nice to see into the author's view of the story and that there is a plan to the story.
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  • From littlepanther on July 25, 2014
    a very good chapter really made my day! I love how sweet Damon is. And how utterly cute and adorable Micha is, thought not as cute and adorable as Harry though. Ohh Fen misses his little mate. Well, it got me thinking, imagine Fenrir taking Harry out for a date...i kept laughing at the image I created though it was because I imagined Fen and Harry in an amusement park.
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  • From ANON - thatgirl889 on July 22, 2014
    First and for most, I would love to say I really love he story but then I would also have to say to say that the story leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I say that mainly because, I actually hate harry in this story. He is spoiled and in all honesty to sensitive and wants everyone to bend to his every mood. On the other hand I love clay. His character is livily, fun and maybe a tad inmuture but who isn't. As I read through the story my thought were that clay was the punching bag of he story, but then when fen made the statement about needing an omega I knew it would come to pass that clay would be the true punching bag. Its sad because clay cares a lot and will go out of his way for his family, but they give his feeling and well being little concern. Hell he was ambushed, went through hell during his dententions, was bullied by his house mates, and is still suppose to act and be sensitive to everyone else when know one is even sensitive to his. At this point I think Clay would do better as a lone wolf. Romy doesn't deserve him, Harry no way in form deserve such a caring friend, because truly if he could yell and fuss and scream at His mate about going to school or alone time, why couldn't he stand up to fen about punishing clay. And to top it off he allowed fen to make him (clay) the lowest rank in the pack, nope not a chance with my best friend. When all was said and done he (harry) leaves to have sex... Even with all this- my dislike for Harry's characte, my disinterest in Romy character and my over the top want for clay to come out on top of it all- I really do enjoy reading the story. Even though I do admit at starting to read this story a while back and got really pissed at Harry's character so I had to stop reading it. Bit I am glad I started again because in all honestly clay is a character worth getting to know and being curious about.
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  • From littlepanther on July 16, 2014
    TeamClay! Anyway, thanks for the update. Poor Sirius though, he may be a jerk but that's because of his stay in Azkaban and losing Harry to Severus, right? I wonder who those werewolves will be. I only hope they're nice.
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on July 13, 2014
    I just got caught up with this story and I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - DragonStar01 on July 11, 2014
    Love it! Can't wait to see the full moon! I love the inclusion of Theo :)
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  • From ANON - OzzieKat on July 11, 2014
    Realky liked chapter. Felt sorry for Cedric. Harry has such a backbone with Fenrir and some strange logic but couldn't use this with Cedric? Sirius is obviously in a world of trouble but he has never been an endearing character in your story. Looking forward to full moon with Remus and more pack development, felt like it has been in limbo with the strays for ages and wish Lukas's girlfriend story would move on
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 10, 2014
    Awesome!!! Harry still has to tell Fenrir about Sev though. Maybe during the full moon?
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  • From ANON - gaia on July 10, 2014
    loved it as always
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  • From littlepanther on July 10, 2014
    though, I really wanted to rip Dumbledore to pieces for being so damn smug the love-making of fenrir and harry really made my day. poor cedric but I think he's not going to give up soon since he thought that harry is being abused.
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  • From littlepanther on June 28, 2014
    it's finally in the next chapter right? as to what will happen to Severus? I hope I won't be crying after I read the next chapter. thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - gaia on June 22, 2014
    loved it as always!
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  • From ANON - DragonStar01 on June 21, 2014
    Welcome back! I missed the you guys! It's so fun to hear more about Micha and Damon--I can't wait for Clayton to find out...
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