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Reviews for Fragmented Soul

By : StrawberryGirl87 & Bickymonster
  • From Ziwiue on December 16, 2019

    Just wondering when chapter 96 will be posted... I really love this book, and I'm extremely excited to see it through the end!


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  • From Makheart on August 29, 2018

    I'm so emotionally invested in the story and all of the characters. You both are amazing writers. Please tell me you plan on continuing the story.


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  • From Darkest_Fantasy91 on December 30, 2017

    Please please please update soon I've been enjoying this story immensely and I'm looking forward to it being finished... I want to see how everything unfolds with niko... Rosie... Aspen... Mocha(because of the strange man at work)... Seamus... Lukas and Nell... Even Robin as much as I hate to admit it lol... Cassie for sure... Pretty much just everyone in this story period if I'm perfectly honest even with the repetitive scenes ;) 


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  • From Babiluv on December 20, 2017

    If you do update  soon i Suggest Reading what you have wrote already because you seem to be repeating some information that you already said but in a different way like Harry asking slughorn for Veritaserum 


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  • From Babiluv on December 20, 2017

    I really hope you write more soon


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  • From silentxxdreamer on August 10, 2017

    You already had Draco get the Dark Mark!

    Chapter 4 "He tugged nervously at his sleeve of his left arm that covered his burning skin that had just been freshly branded with the dark mark"


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  • From SickPuppy on June 10, 2017

    I've just read all of this (up to and including chapter 94) over several days and wanted to leave a review, so here it is (in no particular order):

    Oh fucking hell I hate Robin! I feel sorry for what happens to her with Amycus, but she is still a bitch! I did read the chapter that introduced her and literally said out loud "Oh shit..." when I saw what she thought was going to happen to her with FG. (I'm being vague so I don't spoil it for others) I really can't see her ever settling into pack life and becoming a decent person.

    I was on TeamDraco but seeing Clay and Romy together I've changed my mind as they are sweet, even if they do keep bickering. I understand why Clay is reluctant and why Romy is pushing it, but I think he is right on this one.

    Micha is adorable! I felt so sorry for him when he was with the spy (name has slipped my mind, but you know who I mean) and I'm so glad he's now with Damon. Although I was worried that you were going to not get them together, cos you two do enjoy torturing people, don't you? Oh, and quick question: is it pronounced Me - ka, or Me - sha? Or something else entirely?

    Severus - GET HIM SORTED! (And breathe). So want him to be okay, but at the same time him coming back into the picture will cause problems. Not sure how pleased he'd be at the idea of being turned.

    Glad Remus is joining the pack, although I was not happy to see he was still using the Wolfsbane.

    Poor Seamus! But he seems to be getting a handle. And what is it with Ron and Hermione being just enormous assholes?! I get Ron's upset about Ginny and Neville, but he is SUCH a dick I want to smack him.

    I don't actually like Fenrir/Harry stories, so why I began this is anybody's guess, but as I've stuck around for 94 chapters I clearly liked it! You made Fenrir actually nice, and I liked the way you explained why he had bitten children. Although he seriously needed to take better care of them after! I get he was struggling to rebuild his pack, but for crying out loud!

    It's so sweet seeing Jaylon falling for Aiden and Dean. I was a bit surprised by that, given his own experiences at the hands of two other werewolves, but I guess instinct over-rides.

    And as for those two, there are some phrases you don't want to read and seeing "You're Omega" said to them in the strays pack made me, again, say "Oh shit!" out loud. Even Jack, little toad, doesn't deserve that.

    Harry really needs to get a move on. If Voldie keeps bringing the strays extras, then Fen's pack will be unable to survive soon!

    And finally Harry. I was reading this and had to stop at one point (damned RL), and I was going about my day to day life and found myself worrying about how Harry was doing (it was during his punishment) so good job on writing characters that I care about. On his punishment, it was clever and I'm glad he has stopped being so bratty, but we've seen far brattier now! (Robin, I'm looking at you). I think it's nice that he's started thinking he wants pups. Cute!

    So, er, yeah, I think that's me done for now. More whenever you can please! SP


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  • From Calixandria_420 on May 23, 2017

    I really love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter.


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  • From ANON - Rii on May 03, 2016
    wow..... honestly, I'm surprised Amycus Carrow would touch a werewolf, regardless of what they happened to look like. I wonder if Robin is actually capable of learning that there are nasty people in this world, and not everyone is going to treat her like her parents did. She's very much a product of her upbringing I suppose. I'll keep my opinion of Robin as a person unchanged until we see some character development. Beyond that no one deserves that to happen to them, whether or not I like them as a person/character or not.
    Should be interesting to see how Harry responds to the four new pack members, and their reactions to him.
    Oh God/ess - Gideon has more new psychos..... eeek!!!
    Thanks for all your hard work on this latest chapter.
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  • From ANON - Rii on April 22, 2016
    :O Is it alright to say that I absolutely detest Robyn & I kinda hope that Ron sets the Werewolf Hunters on her or something similar?? Aspen and Rosie sound interesting and I can't wait to see where you go with them. Also, does Jensen finally locate the diadem for Harry??
    Thanks for all your hard work and Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Ginevra_Riddle on March 07, 2016
    As always, love love love this fic!! I do wish you posted more often and that you'd kill Robin, or at least let Harry kill her. But Still an amazing fic!
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  • From whaywood13 on March 06, 2016
    I was wondering if Robin betray the pack?
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  • From ANON - Littlepanther on March 05, 2016
    That last scene....I forgot how to breathe momentarily....looking forward to the next update :) Hopefully it will be the fullnoon.
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  • From ANON - Littlepanther on December 22, 2015
    Thanks for the update!! Really worth the wait! Niko's back home :) finally....
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on December 21, 2015
    I'm so pleased Niko is back with his family - now to sort out the rest of the mess.
    Clay is right Romy can't keep pushing him away at the pack.
    Remus needs to get off the poison.
    Seamus needs to visit the pack for next change.
    Dumbledore needs to be incapacitated and Snape released so Harry can be whole again.
    And I supposed the feral pack outside the wards and Voldemort need to be dealt with as well.
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