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Reviews for 8th Year

By : darkcircles
  • From ANON - bugtree on October 31, 2013
    You have the first chapter repeating itself about ten times just fyi. But I like the begining, hope to see more :)
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  • From ANON - forgot my user name... on October 30, 2013
    The bit that I read was good, shame about the glitch...
    Question though...surely Luna is a 7th year, not 8th?
    Hope to see more of this soon.


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  • From ANON - interested! on October 30, 2013
    Hey!
    looking forward to read more, looks like a good start en an interesting story!
    same as what everyone mentioned: were you so eager to post that you did it more than 8 times :P

    good luck!
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  • From serialcabbit78 on October 30, 2013
    I think you need to read over your first chapter honey... there seems to be a glitch on it
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  • From ANON - tinkerbabe7 on October 29, 2013
    I don't know if you realized this but you repeated the same section over many many times.
    It ends with them getting their password to their new dorms then starts all over from the beginning.
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  • From ANON - Sakuraflowernm on October 29, 2013
    Your story looked awesome what I read was nice. However you repeated pretty much the whole thing over several times and I was sad to not see what happened once they got to the common room :/
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  • From imsandir on October 29, 2013
    Sounds like an interesting story, but you definitely have a formatting/uploading issue going on. The story keeps repeating over and over again. You might want to see about fixing that so people don't get frustrated. Looking forward to reading more and seeing where you take it.
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  • From ANON - AC7 on October 29, 2013
    Umm, not sure if anyone else has said anything but chapter 1 seems to stuck on repeat, the same 2 paragraphs are repeated quite a few times. The story idea seems interesting, not sure about the story just yet, but it's still to early to tell. Look forward to reading more
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  • From goldfish on October 29, 2013
    What happened? The first paragraphs just kept repeating. I liked it though I wish the first chapt. was longer but I guess the glitch interferred. Good idea for a story. Hope the next chapt is up soon.
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on October 29, 2013
    I am pretty sure that you have been told this, but your chapter text keeps repeating itself. I do like the twist about the room assignments, though.
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  • From ANON - NekoKitty933 on October 29, 2013
    WTF?!?! The same paragraph was repeated over and over again o_O
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  • From ANON - lissagal99 on October 29, 2013
    Actually, the whole story repeated 8 times.
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  • From ANON - anon on October 29, 2013
    Ummm...you might want to check your formatting. A part of the story was repeated like 4 times...
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