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Reviews for 8th Year

By : darkcircles
  • From ANON - Claire on August 20, 2015
    Absolutely love this story and would love to see more of it when you get the chance! Thank you for creating an amazing awesome story!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2014
    Where's Nev and Seamus?
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 13, 2014
    Mmmm...liking it so far. Everyone, including me, seems ok with all the pairings at least the ones they know about and Blaise and Pansy are about to go public also.
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  • From Jan on March 10, 2014
    Aw, they are so awkwardly, but lovely together ^_^ please update chapter 8 soon.
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  • From Bickymonster on March 09, 2014
    I don't mean this to be a flame, but more constructive criticism in the hope of helping someone who has the potential to become a good writer actually become one. (some of the most important lessons I have learned as a writer have come from critical reviews, and though I know they hurt at the time, they are the ones that help most in the long run)
    I really am all for a nice simple, fluffy Drarry story but this feels rushed and a little forced. I suggest that you try to develop things a little slower and more carefully; this story would benefit from some more scene setting and description of what they are doing, and from not spelling out, quite so blatantly, what they are thinking. I like some indication of characters thought processes, because that is important for character development, but I think you have taken it a bit far and now your characters lack much of a sense of realism (I know it is fantasy writing, but we still want to be connecting to the characters)
    Also, you seem to have completely over looked the fact that legilimency requires eye contact.
    Overall I was rather disappointed with what you have so far, but I hope you will take this advice on board and learn from it.
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  • From ANON - Yume on February 09, 2014
    Update soon!
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  • From BAFan on February 08, 2014
    Ch. 3

    Um, really hot scene but doesn't Legilimency needs eye contact to work?
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  • From ANON - Diana on February 06, 2014
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 05, 2014
    Chpt 1-3: Looks like fun. I'm sure going along for the ride.
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  • From BAFan on November 04, 2013
    Ch. 2

    Sigh. I just don't get this penchant the HP characters have for walking around with dripping hair and/or torsos after a shower. Personally, the first thing I do is dry off; that's what towels are for, after all. *g*

    Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. Sure hope Ron doesn't continue being a prat.
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  • From BAFan on November 04, 2013
    Ch. 1

    Apparently you fixed whatever the problem was, 'cause there is no repetition now, just a good start to what seems to be an interesting story.
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  • From Jan on November 03, 2013
    Intriguing beginning, hope you update chapter 3 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - tinkerbabe7 on November 03, 2013
    Glitches happen, but I'm glad you could fix it :)
    I'm liking this story. I can't wait to read more and see how this goes.
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  • From ANON - goldfish on November 02, 2013
    Delia's computer is still broken. She is over here beating my desk screaming it can't stop there! Hope your next chapt is up quick. I wouldn't mind knowing happens next myself!
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  • From AFFModerator on October 31, 2013

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it
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