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Reviews for A Mother\'s Switch

By : Thracer
  • From EdTheBeast on September 26, 2019

    It is a great story. Chapter one should be 6,7, or 8!


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  • From Oppresso on January 10, 2019

    Hi, It's a great story. Will you continúe?


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  • From Gamesofdark on May 10, 2017

    this is a really fun story! i hope you manage to find the inspiration to update soon (^_^)

     


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  • From robert77833 on September 23, 2016

    Well over a year now :( Hope you come back


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  • From robert77833 on July 31, 2015
    Please continue this!
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  • From robert77833 on June 21, 2015
    Hope you're planning to update soon? Been quite a while again and I hope this doesn't get abandoned.

    Have you considered posting this elsewhere such as HPFFA alongside here? You'd get a lot more reads and reviews there, which might help motivation.

    Looking forward to the rest of this.
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  • From ANON - Susan on May 10, 2015
    I feel that your building the plot slowly but, not too much of a problem I think you need to start building Harry's confidence and get back to the "present " with lily being pregnant with her sons kid . I don't think James should find out let them work around him and maybe even make him think that the kid is his.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2015
    Hope Rosa and Heather join in on the lessons!
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  • From ANON - zzleKo on April 17, 2015
    Doesn't really make a lot of sense for the lessons to take a slow pace and have Lily explaining what's going on to Harry then the first time they have sex it happens almost by accident in front of his sisters. It feels like we missed chapters in between or something.
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  • From ANON - Wulf on April 15, 2015
    Me again. I just realized that you might've been asking for suggestions for where to take things with the fic. If so, please ignore the first half(or so) of my last review.
    Cheers,
    ~Wulf
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  • From ANON - Wulf on April 15, 2015
    Plot-wise, I think things might have been a bit rushed when compared to the pace of things before this. Although that could be attributed to things just escalating quickly due to anticipation, but that doesn't really fit what's written thus far. If that's what you were curious about. I wouldn't call myself an expert, or good even, at writing though, so don't put too much weight to my words. I will say that regardless of any issues, I still eagerly look foward to the next chapter, and those after. This is a great fic, plot-wise, when one considers that it is smut based. So congrats there, and thank you as well. Anywho, I should stop rambling, so I'll leave things there.

    ~Wulf
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  • From ANON - Swizz on March 10, 2015
    This is an awesome story, will you be writing more?
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  • From ANON - warhorse on February 10, 2015
    I hope you plan on updating this some more, it is awesome.
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  • From ANON - ursus on December 26, 2014
    Ideas:
    -Rosaline Potter enters Lily's room scared and teary eyed with a blood on her panites and see Lily and Harry lying nude on her mother's bed. She could ask what's going on which would scare them. Lilly could explain periods, tell her how she will from now on be interested in boys or/and girls and offer to eucate her as she did /with Harry if she promise to keep it quiet.
    -a joined bath with Lilly, Harry and his sisters in which he will research if other/younger girls reacts the same as Lilly.
    -a misplaced or misused lust potion infulences more women/girls than just Lilly.
    -a drinking night with Lilly and Tonks leads to a girl sex which Harry observes and joins when both women are passed out. They could wake up bound with him taking turns in banging them. Tonks could be stationed as kadet auror security.
    -Harry could ask or borrow Lilly's wand to put a see through charm on his glassess.
    -Harry could watch a porn movie with Lilly and ask her about bondague.
    -Lilly could take her children swimming and shagg with Harry without her daughters being any wiser despite them watching the whole encounter.
    -you could add an family event in which Lilly and her daughters dance around bonfire and are one by one taken by Harry.
    -someone, a woman, could visit the Potters and find Harry and Lily in a compromising incestual situation. To silence said woman, they could kiddnap her and hide in a trunk where they would bind her and use every means (bondague, BDSM) to convince her to keep silence. Could be Tonks whose price could be a marriage contract to Harry. Lilly could trick her into signing one which allows Harry seeking pleasure with other women (namely with Lilly herself) and gives Harry nearly total control of Nym. She could be used for spicing up Lilly's and Harry's sex life and keeping James unaware of what's going on.
    -some outdoor sex / voyage would be welcome. Perhaps Lilly could take her children on vacation in France near nudists' beach?
    -I'd like to see Lilly trying to enslave a Veela (she could be unaware the bird can turn into a girl) in order to give Harry a pet.
    -Lilly could take Harry to visit Alice Longbottom in St.Mungo's ward and he could use the opportunity to give his godmother some pleasure
    -Harry and Lilly could play with polyjuice.
    -Hermione with her widowed mother could stay at Harry's house. He and Lilly could be forced to seduce them if they want to keep their activities going.
    -Lilly could has a potion accident and de age herself enough to be forced to redo Hogwarts starting at Harry's year. It could deactivate her marriage to James seeing as he would be considered a pedophil in wizarding world if they stayed together. Harry/virgin Lilly could be interesting.
    -Lilly could blow up some potion and her animagus form could become Harry's pet/familiar which would force her to obey him and stay close even during Hogwarts)
    -you could think about some non-con with Lilly teaching Harry Obliviation charm (f.e. Petunia comming for a visit or Bellatrix attacking).
    -you could also think about Harry/James body exchange prank. Somethink that will force "James" to take a break from being an auror and force the real one to go back to school.
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  • From ANON - Neil on December 26, 2014
    Keep up the hard work. This is a nices slice of porn and plot keep up the hard work.
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