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Reviews for Daytana

By : Galaxy_Mine
  • From ANON - ChaosLady on November 12, 2013
    It's Knight Bus not "Night bus". It's Kreacher, not "Kreature" and it's appetite not "apatite". Okay, that's all the things that were bugging me. Is it Severus that is messing with Remus or is it someone pretending to be him? I'm confused about that part.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on November 12, 2013
    It's vial not "vile".
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on November 12, 2013
    Tamara is a girls name. So is Tamar. The story is good though, despite the grammar mistakes that drive me crazy.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on November 12, 2013
    Interesting. That's quite a twist!
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