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Reviews for Despising You

By : Chillkat
  • From ANON - deathraven on June 02, 2014
    Fingers crossed that the update fairy visits this story this week!! Ill just be here, waiting, on the edge of my seat, thumbs twiddling... ;-)
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  • From ANON - Victoria on June 02, 2014
    This story is so filled with tension and suspense and very cool magic! It keeps getting more exciting. I'm having a little trouble believing Hermione is so naive about sexual matters (surely she would have read about that, too?) and hope she gets some much-needed advice from Ginny as well as some slowly but inexorably passion-building, steamy, sexual experiences from Draco. The train attack scenes were so visually rich I could see them playing out in my mind like a fabuous action movie. Can't wait to see how things unfold back at Hogwarts.
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  • From ANON - Mish on May 30, 2014
    Words cannot describe how happy I was to see you updated!! I've devoured both chapters already and can't wait for more!

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  • From Astrid-Lemons on May 30, 2014
    Jesus fucking tap dancing Christ! I take back everything. That was definitely worth the wait! Harry is in way over his head. I hope you can update again soon! I'm on the edge of my seat I'm so excited! I secretly hope Harry makes a move on Hermione and Draco hands him his ass.
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  • From ANON - deathraven on May 28, 2014
    YAY!! I was soooo happy to see an update and 2 chapters at that!! Harry needs to back off Dracos woman lol, the attack on the train was great, gave people a chance to see what they are made of!! Fingers crossed for an update soon!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 28, 2014
    Hi! Absolutely no idea how I missed 17, but it was GREAT getting to read two chapters in one sitting. :-) I hope Draco learns to control some of his anger before he "accidentally" hurts someone she cares about. And, where is Hermione's backbone? She stands up to Draco, but can't find it in herself to stand up to Harry and Ron? I loved the action in this chapter and really enjoyed these two chapters!! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Me on May 15, 2014
    This story is wonderful! If you have completed it, please share! I've been checking for an updates almost daily for over a month now. I'm dying to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - deathraven on May 14, 2014
    Dont let the criticism get you down, myself and others love your story!! Hope to see another update soon!!! Fingers crossed!!
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  • From AbigaleReed on May 11, 2014
    I just felt like saying that your grammar is fine,for the purpose of just reading for fun, it is fanfiction and fir fun not for profit or impressing anyone im assuming.mistakes happen and honestly no one has perfect grammar and those who are being overly judgmental are just rude. There are kind ways of telling someone they should work on their grammar and a few of these people seem to lack that ability. Honestly your variety of word choices/vocabulary is more important to me (as long as you use the word correctly which you do) as well as the development of plot and characters is more important than some easily ignored or looked over grammatical mistakes. Sure a beta would be great, it's always good to have a beta, but I dont think that its necessary. Obviously my grammar sucks to a point also but oh well all you can do is work on it haha
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  • From ANON - amaya1015 on May 09, 2014
    Ahhh that was short but so great I hope u get a chance to update soon again love this story
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  • From Dracona63 on May 08, 2014
    I do love the story, but you need to fix the 2nd chapter to be before the third. It confused me greatly when I started reading to suddenly come across the 2nd chapter 5 chapters in. I know it will be a lot of work, but it will be better in the end if you do this so players don't get confused. Simply rename the chapters accordingly and copy/paste the chapters into their correct chapter placement. Since its only 4 chapters that need changed it shouldn't take more than 10 minutes to do it. Also I'd suggest reading over your chapters a couple of times before post and fixing any errors you've had while writing, maybe even finding a beta reader to help you as well.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 07, 2014
    Thank you for another good update! I really enjoyed their reprieve and chance to grow together. I liked her family, her realizing (at least somewhat) that she's a girl and he's a boy, and him being more open and forthright with her and learning what a real family is like. I think they almost had more growth their than on their own with that maniac teacher. Thank you once again and please update again soon! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - deathraven on May 07, 2014
    Yay an update!!! Was so excited when i opened and saw there was one!! Great chapter i only wish there was more for my own selfish desires!! Fingers crossed on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!!
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  • From Astrid-Lemons on May 07, 2014
    First, I would like to throw out there, that critiquing someone else's grammar with a comment full of grammatical errors is very unproductive.

    Secondly, your grammar isn't horrid. There are some errors, but it is not unreadable. Every writer can benefit from having someone else read over their work.

    Thirdly, I love this story! This last chapter did feel a little stagnant. Waiting over 2 weeks for an update when the story is already complete, coupled with updates being subject to change if enough reviews aren't given is irksome. The story itself is wonderful, but if the frequency of updates start to be completely based on review counts, I will have to bid you adieu.
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  • From ANON - Reader #1 on May 07, 2014
    You may be a great story teller, but I'm sorry to say that I don't have the patience to find that out. Your grammar and punctuation are so poor that they make your writing unreadable. If you're going to this much effort to write something, find a beta reader to help you, or learn the proper rules of grammar and punctuation.
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