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Reviews for Despising You

By : Chillkat
  • From ANON - Victoria on March 23, 2014
    I'm loving this story, but this last chapter has me a bit confused. Why couldn't Hermione use her powers to get away from two non-magical men? If she is indeed a sorceress, why would she be in a 'dsmsel-in-distress' postion against muggles? COuldn't she have used her powers to break her bindings and protect herself? ...Anyway. it's an exciting tale and I am enjoying it despite this confusion.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 19, 2014
    That was beautifully, if horribly, done. I thank you for every word and him saving her. But, the overwhelming thought in my head? Who the hell is Boleslaw?! And, the second? Who where the two men who were talking? Loving it still. Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From pepperdoc on March 04, 2014
    I really like this story. It's quite original and an emotional roller coaster for the characters, which is always a bonus.

    I might suggest that you find a beta, however, if only to double check spelling. I promise, I do not mean that in a hurtful way, I honestly adore this story. I noticed that several times you spelled "Lucius", as in Lucius Malfoy, Draco's father- as "Luscious", as in (of food or wine) having a pleasingly rich, sweet taste. I think your word processor just doesn't realize the difference in spell-check. There's nothing wrong with that! But this is why I am saying you may want to find a beta, or someone to informally double-check your spelling... I'll do it if you want. I'm in the forum under MorningSnow. I've never been someone's official beta, just checking spelling.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 01, 2014
    Wow! That was quite an update. I am glad he was able to help her in the end, despite having no spells left. I wonder if she was attacked with how panicked she gets about being anything near sexual. Was Krum more violent than she let on? Was someone else? And, I feel awful for both of them, but his guilt was palpable. Another job well done and I look forward to more. Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - BS on December 16, 2013
    i really liked the first chapter. but it's missing the second?
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