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Reviews for Hiding An Innocent? *COMPLETE*

By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin
  • From ANON - Tannara on July 15, 2014
    Love the story!! IF anyone could make Loki "behave" (like that would ever happen *smirk*) it would be Hermione!! :) Ever thought of an Epilogue? Would a bit of begging help? :) Would love to find out if your muse would allow Loki to come back and learn that he's a father! :) Please please please?!?! :)
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  • From ANON - Aurora Lancy on February 13, 2014
    Honestly? You leave it like that?
    Like hell you do!!!
    Please! Pretty please ith cream on top!
    I want this sequel.
    Hermione is with Lokis child there just HAS to be sequel right?
    You will do one, right?
    Of course I'm right, you can't let us down..., can you?
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  • From ANON - britt on February 12, 2014
    i truly hope you write a second part, because i reeeeeally want to know what happens with loki and hermiones baby.... and of course what happes on asgard. please write more! this was awesome!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Silver1 on February 12, 2014
    Arrgh! Bad bad cliffie!!! I do like the way you wrote this pairing; and also the way Loki was dealing with hiding out with Hermione. I vote for a sequel ASAP please!!! Beside the fact that it would not be fair to your readers - or Hermione- Loki should know that she's pregnant. Or is this an excuse for Odin to try and get rid of her as he did Freya. BTW are you going to have a reason for that in the sequel? Please, please write a sequel soonest!
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  • From ANON - LDeetz on February 12, 2014
    Gods Yes! Please make a sequel asap! Sorry but I'm in love with this story and pairing!!!
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  • From Dreamweaver on February 11, 2014
    That cliffhanger was Just wrong. Please make a sequel the story doesn't feel complete without it
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  • From demonsangel on February 11, 2014
    1. she better throw that potion out. Or at Snape's picture, either works, two you are an evil evil evil person and there better be another story! lol. Please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2014
    Please please please write some more :) it's such a cruel cliff hanger
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  • From ANON - Katlin Malfoy on February 11, 2014
    I hate you you cant leave it like this yo u will v give me headaches :( I'll cry if 8 don't know what happens I'll cry you don't want to see me cry do you btw ★★★★ four stars I felt it was rushed not much background info, and that it was just straight to the point
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  • From ANON - lucky on February 11, 2014
    Please make the sequel. You just can't leave me hanging like this.
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  • From ANON - Aurora Lancy on February 06, 2014
    Of course I'm going to keep on reading^^
    I can imagine Sev in his portrait commenting on Lokis and Hermiones love-life^^
    Does it even matter where in her flat the portrait is? I think Loki will try out EVERY room possible... and some seemingly impossible rooms too^^
    With your dislike of Odin you have something in common with the Japanese... They LOVE Loki nut he "good" Gods are often the bad ones in Mangas...
    Awaiting the new chapter
    Rora
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  • From sailorgemini on February 06, 2014
    bello
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  • From demonsangel on February 05, 2014
    I'm not sure who the bigger brat is here, them, or you XD I have to wonder, if the wand chooses you, wouldn't that mean that if he wanted to do magic her way he would need his own? I'm sure a trip to Olivander's could fix that, with a glamour of course. Though I really really don't buy the "all knowing Olivander who can tell who you are even with a glamour." I mean, if aurors can't always tell when someone has one one, why would one man just because he makes wands? *shakes her head* Never got that. ANYWAYS, great chapter, can't wait to read more. I know you said you were going more off Marvel btw, but are you going comics or movies?
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  • From demonsangel on February 02, 2014
    *blinks* I'm not sure if I should be proud of her, or accuse her of being a naughty girl XD Both, I pick both lol. Very nice chapter! It made me laugh. As always, can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2014
    I normally hate crossovers but I am really enjoying this. Great work and I can't wait to read more.
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