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Reviews for Hiding An Innocent? *COMPLETE*

By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin
  • From ANON - kit on February 02, 2014
    hm....that was not how I expected the date to turn out. It's kind of nice to see that hermione was not turned into a hopeless victim and instead she was Loki's 'hero'! I was a little confused reading the chapter (maybe i missed a line), but it seemed like Harry appeared out of nowhere. If hermione was coming back from a date and surprised to see the attack on Loki, why would harry already be readily there to send the would-be-rapists to azkaban?
    I look forward to reading the next chapter! specifically, since loki called hermione his mudblood! I'm assuming hermione will take offense to that comment since its not exactly a cute pet name and maybe loki doesn't know exactly what that word means...maybe? i dont know
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  • From demonsangel on February 01, 2014
    I have to wonder if he knows what that means...or if she will even care he used the word. Somehow, even if she does, I think it would be more inline with just enough to tell him the meaning. ANYWAYS, that was one hell of a twist o.o She must have been PISSED to use that spell on someone. So glad it was Fen though. He really really deserved that. Lesson learned, do not answer the door. EVER.
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  • From ANON - kit on February 01, 2014
    The scene in the ROR was quick, but I still enjoyed it, especially the little kiss underwater. It was very sweet! appealed to the inner romantic, in me.
    oh!! drama is coming up! I'm actually excited for Hermione's date. She said it herself, she needs to get laid. I'm looking forward to Loki's reaction: is he going to sulk? is he going to be mischievous and try to sabotage the date? going to get angry? or just act coldly towards hermione? sorry, for the small ramble.
    there are so many possibilities!
    I look forward to the next chapter
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  • From demonsangel on January 31, 2014
    *laughs* Oh I am WELL aware of that! I like how you are doing so much so differently in this. Poor Hermione, for once something did not come easy for her lol. BUT, if anyone has a chance of managing it, it's her! Oh dear, bit of conflict in that one! To be fair though, in her place, I probably would have thought the same way she is, that it wouldn't last and he would leave.
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  • From demonsangel on January 31, 2014
    Wow. Just wow o.o That was both a horrible (not in a bad way but like very sad) and hilarious chapter. I especially loved Hermione's smart-ass comment at the end! XD I have no doubt that she would do it too! But it's probably best not to since it is always a good idea to stay on that mans good side. Can't wait to see what you do with the ROR in the next chapter! Heaven help if he finds the library...you may never get him out!

    I so love being able to read new chapters at the end of the week lol. I wish I could read them as they come out, but hw calls!
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  • From ANON - Aurora Lancy on January 30, 2014
    Kyyaaaa absolutely love it.
    It's like a Severus/Hermione because he and Loki are so similar AND it has my beloved Loki-kun in it.
    Well I guess you needed a villian but it'S sad that it had to be Odin... Would have been nicer if it was Heimdal ore some other minor God^^
    And I still can't grasp WHY Marvel made Loki and THOR brothers and Odin Lokis adoptive Dad... In Mthology Loki and ODIN are "bloodbrothers" so they are the adopted brothers and Thor would be Loins nevew.. Well Marvel srewed this up not you and it is a Potter/Marvel Crossover after all...
    You wouldn't let Mione put poor Sevs second portrait in the men-lockerroom, would you?
    This would be just plain evil!
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  • From ANON - kit on January 29, 2014
    I don't usually read crossover stories, but yours is very interesting. especially since I do, very much, like Loki.
    I really enjoyed this chapter and how you portrayed snape. haha he's a little pervert! which is very amusing since he still has a snarky attitude. Can't wait to read what happens in the ROR
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  • From demonsangel on January 19, 2014
    Sounds like someone is off their rocker. Mad with grief perhaps? *shrugs* Either way, yet another good chapter. Honestly, I think I follow your stories more than anyone elses. In fact, I know I do! Glad to see Thor is starting to listen to what is own heart and mind tell him and that Ginny is giving Harry good advice (I am so tired of Ginny bashing stories. Once in a while it's ok, but all the time? No.) Great job tying the two worlds together. I wonder if they would be able to teach each other their own kinds of magic? I mean, it almost sounds like what Loki does is similar to non-verbal, and who better to learn than the brightest witch?
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  • From ANON - Silversal on January 19, 2014
    Cute story, nicely writen. I will become back to read some more when you do update again. Great job keep it up.
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  • From demonsangel on January 17, 2014
    Well, that clears up the transfiguration lol. Nice hun. Glad to see she is realizing that keeping him in the house is probably not the best idea! I like how this is developing.
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  • From demonsangel on January 16, 2014
    Another great chapter. I always had a weakness for the sudden "crap I need an excuse, oh i know, I love that person" trick lol. I think Loki may be lucky though, if it were me, I would probably pull the "how tired of the couch are you and what are you willing to do" card for the bed. But then, I am usually bored and use things like that to get good behavior out of people...less stress for everyone! Why can't she transfigure a bed though? No one said it had to be huge. Anyways, can't wait to read more!
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  • From DiamondFloodedDemons on January 14, 2014
    Aaaaah! Loki is so damn hot! Aside from Severus Snape, he's got to be my other major fictional character crush. Lol. Thanks! I look forward to reading more. :)
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  • From demonsangel on January 13, 2014
    Something tells me, that he is going to realize he has met his match in stubbornness fairly soon. Loved this chapter, the last part especially made me laugh lol. Can't wait to read more. Hope you feel better soon!
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  • From demonsangel on January 11, 2014
    I. Love. You. You are now officially my hero for using one of my most favorite characters EVER! *hugs, trying not to squeal* And I am so glad it is you!!! I have seen others try and I don't like it, but I ALWAYS love your stories and know you are an awesome writer and can't wait to read more of this!!
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  • From Hardygirl133 on January 10, 2014
    Ahhhh!!!Loved it!!!Can't wait to see what you do with the sexy Loki ^.^
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