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Reviews for Cinders

By : KohakuShadow
  • From ANON - TNT on December 13, 2016

    I loved this so much!
    Your writing style was great, and there were a few choice phrases that I absolutely adored: "Draco's hand making mischief at the junction of his thighs", "The hands were no more idle." were my two favorites, and really stuck out to me. Of all the ways to segway from one movemnt to another in a scene, 'The hands were no more idle' is damn near poetry, I'd say. I've been working on my own fics, and OC's but have felt they've been missing something recently, and this made me realize, that I've been leaving out the artistry in trying to just get it written. Your details are perfectly descriptive, while not going overboard to unbearably vulgar. A very tasteful fanfic, and wonderful reading experience. 
    I've never actually read a Ron/Draco fic before, but this one has created a sudden need in me for more of this pairing.
    " It was a cycle that continued until the shag reached a screaming, groaning, messy crescendo and Ron fell breathless beside Draco on the mattress." This was also a piece that was noteworthy, in two ways. I feel like this accurately describes sex, while still maintining the elegance of your writing style. It brings the sex scene to a fast close, but adeptly portrays the sometimes hastened, and senseless experience of orgasm. 
    10/10 story, no real criticisms from me. 


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  • From Severus1snape on February 06, 2016
    gonna read this for the fifth time now....
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  • From Severus1snape on November 26, 2015
    OMG this is absolutely brilliant.
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  • From on May 01, 2015
    Another good one and a surprising couple besides. I really enjoy your out of the box plots and pairings. You really make them work also. In fact I really wish this one was longer or had a sequel...love how different they are but how well they are fitting.
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  • From ANON - kitkat on August 29, 2014
    Perfect! Absolutely perfect. This isn't a cumin pairing but I love to read it when I find it and this was amazing work. I'll be checking out your other work for sure.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2014
    Adorable! You really make the couple so believable here. I like the clumsy details like Draco stubbing his toe and their teeth hitting one another. So many stories are just like: "and then they had this magical perfect sex without ever having touched each other before" when really a first time with someone takes a little getting used to the other person. A really sweet story. Thanks for writing :)
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