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By : Sealpotter
  • From ANON - Meechypoo64 on March 15, 2014
    Harry was able to rescue Draco but the event will forever be marked on their souls. Harry's guilt will be everlasting but Draco will help temper that by loving him. I was amazed at the depth of their feelings and in awe of the bond they share. So moved that Harry allowed himself to be truly connected to Draco by letting Draco take him and show Draco that he is his in every way and that Draco is truly his own savior and guide. Heart wrenching but beautiful chapter.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From djaddict on March 15, 2014
    Nope, still traumatized. Can't think.

    However, the image of Snape staring dumbfounded at his patronus being Sirius was priceless. And the two of them were smoking hot as usual.

    I hope the next chapter comes quick!

    Still think you are evil
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on March 14, 2014
    After what Harry saw,how could he be stupid enough to let Draco out of his sight? I can't forgive him for letting that happen to Draco. I was enjoying this story,now I don't think so.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on March 14, 2014
    The horcruxes are destroyed and Harry felt their destruction as his own piece of Voldemort cried out to its brethren. Watching Harry die will be excruciating to Saco and openly he will remember Harry's words well and get through it without to much heartache. Severus submitted to Sirius in the only manner he could by providing Sirius with all of the pleasure in a most vunerable way. I'm glad he was ale to finally give in to his heart and proclaim his ILY. By doing so it will help mend the broken heart he had over Lily all these years. Harry and Draco getting to live out a teenaged fantasy was certainly sexy, hot and enjoyable but knowing that Draco is being tortured is torture to us as we now have to wait for another chapter. Based upon your prelude to the next one, I don't think it will be a pretty end to Amycus and even Vincent! Wonder what Voldemort will say now?

    Please don't keep us waiting too long. I don't think my heart can stand it.


    ~~ Meechy
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  • From djaddict on March 14, 2014
    I hate you so much right now!

    Love you for updating but you are so mean to poor Draco, not to mention your faithful readers!

    More after I recover. I need chocolate.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 13, 2014
    Oh holy moly!!! They've got to find him!!!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 09, 2014
    I look for this everyday! Always want more!!! I love the relationship between H/D and SS/SB.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 08, 2014
    Perfect!!!! I love H/D!!!
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  • From ANON - djaddict on March 07, 2014
    Happy sigh.

    I enjoy how each little thing that we learn about Harry and his new powers fits together like jigsaw pieces and just hint at the future whole picture.

    Severus and Sirius are "beyond my ability to think" hot, hot, hot! I keep thinking that each sex scene with them couldn't get any hotter and then you go and prove me wrong!

    Really love the character and relationship development here with all of the characters.

    Great update - really enjoyed!!!!

    Nitpicky stuff, I think I have too much time on my hands, lol:

    Some little word choices stuff---

    (During his encounter with Merlin) You as a son of the earth will bare the strength... "bear"

    (Sirius to Harry, scene right after the vision with Merlin) ...and when your gone, well there is nothing left. "you're"

    (Draco to Harry, scene after Severus/Sirius sex scene) I wonder if there is a spousal tutoring program aloud. "allowed"

    (In the beginning of Harry's testing) Harry had to gain only the defense certificate, but allowed he the Ministry to test all teaching areas. I don't think the second half of that sentence is structured how you want it to be.

    (Just before Severus tries to crucio Harry in the test) Severus whispered to the dog which wined next to him. "whined"

    And you seem to have been awfully fond of commas in this chapter. I think you over used it a bit, especially in the first half of the chapter, and things are not reading as smoothly because of it.


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  • From ANON - MoonTart on March 06, 2014
    This is a very interesting fic. An interesting twist on the "Fix-it" fics that usually involve time-travel. Look forward to more.
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  • From HaitianPrincess on March 03, 2014
    Wow this story is absolutely wonderful. Please keep me updated when you add another chapter and the rest of your stories. Wow I am in awe. My email address is Michaelle_Torchon@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on March 02, 2014
    Lucius was absolutely devastated to really feel what Harry and Ginny went through because of his own actions. Ginny is true a wonderful person to see his true remorse and find forgiveness for him. Draco wants again lends Harry is strength and magic so that Harry cold in turn defend Severus and Lucius. I'm so glad he was able to intervene so that neither man would have to sully the soul even more. I was most moved though by Sirius showing Severus that he could let go and be the true dominant without worrying about hurting Sirius. The depth of emotion was truly felt between both men. Bravo. I laughed and then cried when Dumbledore came back frm Bermuda. Laughing at how Harry forced them to get pat their anger and cried to know that their sister sacrificed herself so that the brothers would stop fighting. She felt it was the only way for everyone to find peace. Maybe now they can truly move on and be family again.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 02, 2014
    Well I never thought of that solution to which killed Ariana. Good one! Harry gets worn down easily huh? Good thing Draco's around but this time it wore both out. What will happen next time?
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  • From djaddict on March 02, 2014
    Wow! That was a truly powerful scene. Very beautiful way to absolve both of the brothers.

    I am enjoying the evolution of Lucius very much. His reaction to the memory and his personal revelations show a very believeable change is his fundamental beliefs.

    Severus and Sirius are hot and perfect as always. Really love them together!!

    You gave Harry and Draco their adult bodies! Lol. Much better than the 15 year old ones to picture!

    Nitpicky - left the e off of breathe once in the scene with S/S but it was just typing error because you had it later in same paragraph. ( One of my personal pet peeves. Lol)

    Can't wait for more but now I am scared of Chap. 19. Teehee.
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  • From BAFan on March 02, 2014
    Ch. 17

    So much happened in this chapter that I'm having trouble remembering it all! Lucius now knows exactly what Harry went through in the Chamber and Ginny has forgiven him;that's good. Albus and Aberforth returned from their forced holiday and are friends again. Er, brothers, I mean. Harry fooled Voldemort and saved a woman's life; that's best of all. So, yeah, another good chapter!
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