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Reviews for Fate Falls

By : Sealpotter
  • From djaddict on February 16, 2014
    o/ Another new chapter!

    Great Malfoy family interaction. Enjoying the use of augur powers but my evil side wishes for vengeance instead of justice or mercy. Just once please? Maybe Bellatrix since you were nice to Umbridge. Lol

    One little wtf? moment... Troll made coveralls? Big, hulking, club-wielding, human eating trolls make things? Lol

    Enjoyed

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  • From ANON - Something_Else on February 16, 2014
    Just one bit struck me, for nitpicking, that is.
    Andromeda's husbands name is Ted, not Tom.
    Thought you should know.
    Write more, please.


    Bob
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on February 16, 2014
    A very touching chapter. Kreacher's redemption is a long tme coming and now he can heal sooner than before. When Draco finds out about Harry's childhood he will want to rage and be saddended all at the same time. I'm glad that the Malfoys are going to apologize to the Weasleys. Maybe the feud can finally die and the two families will be able t work together to bring down Moldyshorts! Thank you for attempting to save the dragon at Gringotts!

    PS - Who knew Severus would take such an active role and that Sirius wold gladly submit to him...a thought they might fight for dominance at least a little but Sirius has been pining after Severus for far too long.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Sparrowhawk on February 16, 2014
    Still not caught up yet. Just finished reading Ch. 10. I think you portrayed that part with Dumbledore and the ring quite well. There would be a lot of temptation involved in that. Thank goodness Harry was there :) Still loving what I'm reading and can't wait to read more. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 15, 2014
    Enjoying it especially now that Draco and Harry are together and Harry is busy straightening things out. Reading about Severus and Sirius is great fun.
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  • From djaddict on February 15, 2014
    A little nitpick ( thought you wouldn't have to suffer that this time, didn't you).

    In the second to last chapter you used acertations, and I am not sure what word you meant to use there. Assertions possibly?
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  • From djaddict on February 15, 2014
    Holy crap that was really hot! Very nice imagery.

    I did not mean to imply that your Harry was a know it all. He's not, this is very well done.

    So much to love in this chapter. The scene in the hall with Severus and Sirius was epic. Harry and Draco's connection is magical (pun not intended). Too much more to mention.

    Loving it!!

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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on February 14, 2014
    I love how Harry is going to recruit Kreacher. Instead of simply forcing Kreacher to tell his sad tale, he will work on boosting his ego over caring for the House of Black. I can't wait until they send him after the sneak thief Mudungus for stealing his "responsibility" and last memory of Regulus! Undoubtably one of the best scenes in the book. Severus just attacked Sirius and left him a pile of goo. Those two or gong to burst into flames when they finally get together. I love that Draco is there to balance out Harry and has his own powers over the augur to make him equal. Unfortunately, that places a huge target on his back from Harry's enemies.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on February 14, 2014
    This story is wonderful, I spent all night reading it!
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  • From slmncpm on February 12, 2014
    just found this and read it straight through. i like it, i hope you don't take too long in writing out chapters. *laughs* i am greedy like that. *hands you scones*
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  • From ANON - Nathoca Malfoy on February 12, 2014
    Fantastic fic!
    But you forgot to publish the epilog!
    Kisses and congrats!
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  • From Ladydragonstar55 on February 12, 2014
    This is an amazing story
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on February 11, 2014
    Somwe gotmtomsee just how much Dumbledore loved and missed his sister and just exactly how much he regrets some of his past decisions. I worried for a moment that he would indeed touch the stone again, but thankfully Harry vanished the stone before he could. Draco and Harry's bonding was unexpected but simply a joy to know they can't be separated now! Sirius' reaction to their bonding should be interesting to say the least. I'm very much looking forward to the Christmas holidays spent a Grimauld Place, especially when the Malfoys and Severus show up!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From djaddict on February 11, 2014
    I had a feeling that the "voice" would be the prior augur but missed the fact that the prior augur was Merlin. Lol

    The whole scene, receiving the book, was very cool. The rune circle, the power and especially the bonding was beautiful and moving. I really love augur Harry and the fact that he is not "all knowing" all the time. That kind of characterization gets flat and boring in my opinion. *cough*Hermione*cough* lol

    Nitpicky -- back up at the end of the ceremony/ritual when you talk about the power dying down and simmering, I had to read it a time or two because at first I thought you meant to say 'shimmering' at first. Maybe you might want to revise, I am not sure it is conveying what you want it to.

    Just do you know, I did a little happy dance when I saw the update and even paused my replay of the Olympics to read. This is one of my favorite WIPs going right now.
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  • From Sparrowhawk on February 11, 2014
    Great chapter, chapter nine, since I'm not quite caught up yet :P Love the practice throwing off the imperious curse as well as Harry's and Draco's interaction - so cute! Interesting what he did to Crabbe, though I have to tell you I was cheering in my head, lol. Looking forward to reading chapter ten! Keep up the good work ^_^
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