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Reviews for Fate Falls

By : Sealpotter
  • From ANON - Meechypoo64 on February 11, 2014
    I loved this chapter! Harry and Draco say their ILYs and Harry saved Draco, while Draco showed how much he can save Harry by providing him with a safe haven. Harry showing Draco his worst moment with Draco in his vision and Draco accepting that they are not those people was so touching, I sooo wanted to read the next two chapters but it's almost 2am here and I really, really need some sleep.

    Guess I know what I'll be doing when I wake up!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Sparrowhawk on February 10, 2014
    Talk about intense there at the end! Love that bit with the darkness and the blue fire, the image in my mind from that ... just wow. Can't wait to see what develops from this. And sorry I've not been around, I've been rather sick the past little while. But I'm still here and still loving it!
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  • From djaddict on February 09, 2014
    Well, to me, if there is an orgasm -- it's sex. Lol

    Albus Dumbledore (canon) frustrates me, which I am sure was one of J.K.'s goals for him as a character, to be enigmatic. But there are so many little things that he could have done to make things better for Harry without disrupting her storyline. Sigh. It has made me prefer Dumbledore bashing stories in some ways. To get to my point, I love this scene with Dumbledore where you can actually feel the weight of remorse and despair that he carries and how Harry handles him. Very nicely done.

    I am really inappropriately excited when I see you have updated. :)
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  • From ANON - addiena_saffir on February 08, 2014
    I have no idea why I didn't start reading this when it first came out, but I'm glad to start it now. The story is super intriguing.
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  • From ANON - BAFan on February 07, 2014
    Ch. 8

    Another good chapter, with a lot happening in it. A benevolent Umbridge? The mind almost boggles! ;-) So very glad Ron turned out to be more mature than everyone expected; I'm tired of stories where he turns into an absolute jerk because of Draco and Harry. JMO, of course.

    Gotta run, but again, well done!
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  • From moodysavage on February 07, 2014
    omgosh I just finished reading chapter 8 and it was so so so awesome!!! I loved how Harry showed Umbridge the effects of her actions. I think that worked better than any kind of punishment. She would have just been angry and more self-righteous if he had punished her in some way but seeing herself and how ugly and horrendous she had lived her life was a great idea. People like that do not often examine their motives and actions because they are so focused on being right and getting their way. Awesome awesome scene.

    And I loved the scene with Severus and how Snape is opening up to change his own feelings of guilt as well as being willing to help Harry get over his. They are able to understand each other in this better than anyone else. And the way you have written it and the pacing if this flows very naturally. Very well done.
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  • From djaddict on February 07, 2014
    Dammit, I had a feeling you would end it before he got the book. But there was a lot going on here so it is understandable.

    That sex scene was a little stylized for me but was gorgeous and hot nonetheless. Those two are beautiful together.

    I just love your characterization of Harry. The blending of young/old, knowledgeable and somewhat jaded/somewhat ignorant and naive, is very well done.

    Eagerly awaiting more.

    Nitpicky (lol) a few typing/spelling errors mainly in the first half but I am sure you will catch them on re-read.
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  • From djaddict on February 06, 2014
    I am enjoying this story so much. Definitely one of my favorite "time travel" stories!

    More great Severus/Harry interaction, I am just loving the building of their relationship. And even though brief, the kiss with Draco was lovely. Surprise Ron reaction, much more mature than the canon character. I am starting to like him again.

    I have to admit that my solution for Umbridge would have her burned alive by those flames but... it is one of the more unique scenes I have seen with her. I am eager to see the results.

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on February 06, 2014
    Harry finally admits his love for Draco, at least to himself and Severus. Severus is slowly letting go of his past hurts and guilt and with his help Harry can do the same. Ron is impressing far more with how quickly he is maturing this time around. I can't wait until Christmas when Severus and Sirius will get to interact more closely. Dolores just got the shock of her life and maybe had her soul cleansed this time!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 06, 2014
    Wow! The new enhanced Harry! Does this chapter mean that Sirius doesn't fall into the veil after all? If I can't have Severus/Harry Draco is an excellent second choice with Sirius being an excellent second choice for Severus.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on February 05, 2014
    Lovely!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on February 04, 2014
    So Draco and Harry are heating up and Harry is learning that Draco will always be the to simply calm his soul. Harry has always needed someone who cares more about him than everyone else's perceived conventions of who he should be. The spider web is an act of genius. This lets Bellatrix think she's won yet we all know that Sirius will be alive and well...well at least if everything goes to plan.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From djaddict on February 03, 2014
    Another great chapter! Harry's focus is awesome but I love how he gives in to the temptation that is Draco.

    Nitpicky stuff ---

    Technically the curse is called cruciatus, only the incantation is crucio.

    Somewhere in the middle, about the 20th paragraph you have "Aura" department instead of Auror.

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From BAFan on February 03, 2014
    Ch. 7

    Brilliant chapter! I'll be on tenterhooks during the Dept of Mysteries fiasco wondering if something will go wrong. Oh, and I quite understand about having a personal pronunciation; there are certain words I pronounce wrongly just because I prefer it that way. "Augur" I've always pronounced as "ah-gyur" and that probably won't change, lol.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 02, 2014
    chpt 1-6: Very very good. I'm hooked. Will continue reading for sure. I like a knowing powerful Harry. He is much more interesting...sexy...not being a boy with little knowledge or understanding of what goes on and often feeling sorry for himself or letting others choose his path or what he will know.
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