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Reviews for Fate Falls

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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on January 27, 2014
    I look forward to each new chapter and finding out how Harry deals with blending the past into a brighter future. I'm sorry Draco has already had to pay a small price for his new friendship to Harry but in the end it will be worth it for the both of them. Severus has tried sme of Harry's suggestions with an open mind and they too are showing good results. I'm glad that Harry took sme time to talk to Sirius. Maybe he will grow up this tme.

    ~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - yngoldfogee on January 26, 2014
    Love what you've done so far and an looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From Kayrox133 on January 26, 2014
    Oh and if we are fixing mistakes please get Sirius a mind healer. He spent too many years as a dog in Azkaban.
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  • From Kayrox133 on January 26, 2014
    So I really, really like what you have written so far. Love how Trelawney's eyes look big as dinner plates. She has always cracked me up. As for Snape, I would like to see him move on. He has sacrificed so much and just needs to chill with someone who is away from all the Order mess to bring that light to his life. He needs that happiness. I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Here's to the next chapter. :)
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  • From Arithmancer on January 26, 2014
    Brilliant idea. I, personally, think that by changing the relationship between Harry and Sev to a paternal relationship woul help Sev become more open to love and freeing him from Voldie would do the same. Let him find love. Are Remus and Sirius together? Because if they are Sev coul have Tonks!
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  • From moodysavage on January 25, 2014
    Snape should find love again. Snape isn't stupid and even though he has all this regret and guilt... being a spy would make it impossible for him to fall in love with someone normally because either they would be a supporter for Voldemort and therefore against what he is working against or they would be against Voldemort and a weakness or in danger because of him. Either way he would not want to bring a person he cared about into his situation. And he died before he ever really got a chance to live.

    If Voldemort is defeated earlier and without Severus being killed... then of course he deserves to find love. Not that he will go looking for it but he isn't a stupid man so if love finds him he will hold and protect it.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 25, 2014
    You've still got me under your spell! I can't wait to see where this leads!!!
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  • From ANON - Rosealynne on January 25, 2014
    Awesome job so far . Think Snape has been through enough pain new time line new love . Not saying he can't still love lily just not in same way. Keep up awesome job can't wait for ch3
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on January 25, 2014
    Im glad Ron took it better than I hoped. While not thrilled....who would be at that amount of change... He still managed to do the right thing and give Draco a chance. The more Harry fills Draco in the easier it will be for them to get closer as each unveils the nastier sides of their backgrounds so as to break down illusions of what their life is really like.

    Oh... And yeah, Snape definitely needs a love interest. I think since he was never really forgiven for his past by anyone directly, he never forgave himself and moved on. Therefore he kept the torch for Lily longer than he should have. Not sure who to pair him with without breaking someone else up and drastically changing attitudes, like Sirius'. That man "seriously" needed to grow up!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Sparrowhawk on January 25, 2014
    Pretty mellow reactions to the change in loyalties so far. Wonder when the crazy reactions are going to start coming out. Lol, hey, has to happen sometime, right? ^_^ Anyway, wonderful job. Loved the flashback in the astronomy tower and Harry's conflict over his connection to Draco. Looking forward to more. Keep up the good work!
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  • From djaddict on January 25, 2014
    I was so happy to see a second chapter to this that I squealed outloud and scared people! Lol

    Poor Harry never really gets a break does he? I am worried about how much of the "future" he is revealing but I really love the pace of the story so far.

    I would love to see Snape move on and find happiness. He deserves it.

    Eagerly anticipating more!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 24, 2014
    Continue!!!!! You held me spellbound!!! I love this!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Katniss Everdeen on January 24, 2014
    I like this and haven't read one quite like it so please continue. Great start!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo64 on January 24, 2014
    They always say the hindsight is 20/20 and here we get to see Harry correct some of the most painful and horrible mistakes of the past...or future! His interactions with everyone are definitely interesting and I can't wait to read more!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From BAFan on January 24, 2014
    Ch. 1

    Very different take on a fairly common theme. I'm quite interested to see where you take this.
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