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Reviews for Fate Falls

By : Sealpotter
  • From djaddict on May 01, 2017

    Love this, they are so cute! 

    The chapter did one of those duplicating things where the whole thing is repeated. 


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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on December 07, 2016

    So when I saw this story on the updated list with an epilogue, I couldn't resist reading it all over again! It took about 3 days for me to get through it all as my time didn't allow as much reading time as I would have liked but what a rush it gave me. It was a wonderful story and I look forward to many new ones from you!

    ~~ Meechy


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  • From ANON - KeenyM on December 07, 2016

    Hi I just want to say I discovered this gem of a read a bit late in the game :) Luckily for me this has meant that I have not had to wait for updates. Even though you have completed this novel I feel I must say that I have enjoyed it a great deal. As such I am eagerly reading everything else on your author page and cannot wait to see what in happening next.

    Kind regards

    Keeny

    (should you have other sites where your work can be found please feel free to mail me - if at all possible at marciakeen22@gmail.com) :)


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  • From djaddict on December 06, 2016

    I forgot to add before that I totally think that you would do a great job writing erotica fiction that is original work and not ff. You have a nice style.


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  • From djaddict on December 06, 2016

    I really, really love this story so much. It was quite the journey and was a very unique example of time travel that wasn't.

    Draco and Harry were beautiful together and Severus and Sirius were stormy and wild. Much like you, I am both happy and sad to see this story end. Hayy for a great conclusion and sad because it is over.

    I loved the opportunity to reread this again. Thank you for sharing  

    Will you ever post on AO3?


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  • From ANON - POTTERPHILE on December 25, 2014
    I have enjoyed this story so much. Im not usually a big drarry fan. I prefer snarry... but this was so well done. I adored the siri.. sev storyline. I was intrigued by what you did with albus and gellert. I had certainly never seen that before. Although with Gellert generally accepted to be the power or hammer behind hitlers insanity... i am normally in favor of a strong harshjudgement. thank you for sharing your work.
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  • From slmncpm on December 10, 2014
    i think it was fantastic. *smiles* i love that they had their soulmates already. thank you for all of this.
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  • From ANON - Naughty_megs on November 29, 2014
    I really loved this story, you did an amazing job! The storyline was really unique, and I love how you touched on the world around the characters asking changes for the better. Also the combination of couples, you definitely achieved what you set out to! Thanks for a great story!
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  • From ANON - staar on November 29, 2014
    that was awesome !!!! harry's girl with Sev&Sirus boy loved it !!!!!! and Snape always with the last word (better a another Potter than a Wesley ) !!!!!!! thanks you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so good so sad that it done done !!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on November 29, 2014
    Fsntastic story! I really love that the grandsons of the Marauders are soul mates to the sons of Prot
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2014
    That was beautiful.
    I think you have and will succeed in both your endeavors.
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  • From BAFan on November 29, 2014
    Epilogue

    A lovely ending. Poor Harry - both sets of twins?? I feel for him. And of course you should try your hand at writing a novel. I do strongly recommend that you find a good beta, however. :-)
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  • From ANON - Kat on November 29, 2014
    Awesome!!! Poor Sev. A Potter. Oh well. Sad for it end but all good things must,right?
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  • From Mashkai30 on November 27, 2014
    Awesome story! Thank you for sharing:)
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  • From ANON - staar on November 25, 2014
    This was a wonderful ending !!!!!!!!! you didn't miss a thing ! Thank you , it's been a joy reading this !!!! let's see were you take us in the elpi !!!!!!!
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