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By : Sealpotter
  • From ANON - Meechypoo on October 01, 2014
    Things are starting to fall into place. I'm proud of Severus and his want to prove to Sirius the "seriousness" of his commitment. Sorry couldn't help myself. Harry finds a new way to give Draco pleasure and to see magic in a new way and Harry's plans came color to fulfillment. I can't wait to see Fudge's reaction to the Wizangamot finding out about him citing an unforgivable in an attempt to discredit Harry and control the press! Should be fun.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - djaddict on October 01, 2014
    Oops! Missed a question.
    So Pansy mentioned Blaise's mother. Does this mean that no one else knows that she is dead?
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  • From ANON - djaddict on October 01, 2014
    That whole "magic-weaving" thing was really cool! Can't wait to see where the power to see magic is really needed. Not that brining both of them off wasn't necessary. lol

    The only good Fudge is the one I make at Christmas. (rubs hands together in anticipatory glee)

    Nit-pick - possessive of Bones should be Bones' not Bone's. :)
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  • From djaddict on September 17, 2014
    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! Cliffie?

    You evil, evil author. Lol

    Poor Blaise. But I suppose it was necessary?

    I want Fudge to suffer humiliations galore (gratuitous guess the movie reference)

    I am sure that the issue with manipulating time will come up and poor Harry will suffer for it.

    Must have more!,

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  • From ANON - Naughty_megs on September 15, 2014
    Another well written chapter, love the way this is progressing, what will be next!!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on September 14, 2014
    Poor Blaise! His mother was doomed as soon as she penned the later telling him not to come home. I really love the Severus/Sirius portion of this story. They're both so damaged in someway but have the strength that they need to properly comfort and love the other. They really are two sides of a coin. I'm thinking that Harry may have secreted Grindlewald away and now Dumbledore too can disappear to find the love he once had, this time without interference. I'm sure Harry will have to ensure Grindlewald's sanity but it gives Dumbledore a choice for happiness that he would not have otherwise. What will he choose this time?

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - staar on September 14, 2014
    wow I wonder what the headmaster will do now....so sad that Blaise's mom had to die....thanks for the update see ya soon !!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - djaddict on September 11, 2014
    Yeah!! Two chappies to love!

    Severus and Sirius are just such a great couple in this story. I love their interaction and Severus' thought processes.

    I thought all of the talks that Harry arranged were great and should have given the listeners more insight into the various magical creatures.

    I am afraid that these few chapters have just raised more and more questions for me, which I am sure is your goal. What is it Harry needs to learn about Tom? What is the minister going to accomplish? What is going to happen in the Vince/Minister/Voldie plot? Are we going to see another Auger "judgment" soon? Is Sanguini going to go kidnap Lockhart from St. Mungos? Will Snape ever get to quit spying? Soooo many questions! I really love this story!

    Now for my nitpicks, lol. Which I know you have missed. (Sure, right?) I'm giving you whole passages so you can find easier where I am talking about.

    1. [His reached around and tightened his grip on Draco and they lay together, breathing each other and soaking up the wonder of their love.]

    He instead of His.


    2. Harry to Albus [
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on September 03, 2014
    Lots going on in this chapter. Harry and Draco spend a little time giving in to their passion whilst Harry work to uncover an important aspect of Tom's psyche. Too bad he's twisted beyond repair, I wouldn't want to have to spend anytime in that mind. It surely must leave you feeling somewhat slimy. Severus is pondering a romantic gesture so he's a little out of his element. Finally, Voldemort thinks he's in control of all of the players but he doesn't understand fate holds all the car and she's dealt Harry the winning hand. Boy is he in for a rude awakening.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - staar on August 22, 2014
    New to your story !!! Been reading for 2 days and can I say that I love it....Another new twist to the story of coming back to fix things!!!!! love it !!!!!! man I can't wait till you update again....you have me so hooked.....waiting for the main wvwnt is killing me !!!!!!!! hope to see you sooner than later :):)::):)
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  • From BAFan on August 20, 2014
    Ch. 29

    Whew! This had me on the edge of my seat!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on August 20, 2014
    So glad to read another chapter of this fabulous story! I'm glad that Draco and Harry are rebounding under the stresses of the curse. Harry's happiness sometimes becomes like a drug where everyone feels almost high...except maybe Severus. Fortunately for Sev, he is finding the ultimate happiness in finding his other half in Sirius. Sirius will help him heal and between the two become one whole and loving soul as each will feed the other what they need. Remus will now be able to truly enjoy life without the worry of his illness and soon others will be cured as well! I love how Sanguini may find his mate in Lockhart because isn't it just fitting that someone with all of his "experience" fighting dark wizards and creatures would be the mate of a dark creature! Too funny! Can't wait for the next chapter, because maybe Sev will actually ask Sirius to bond with him. Hint hint.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Calmzone1 on July 29, 2014
    riveting story! I really hope you get to update it. If you do, could you email me please :)
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  • From djaddict on July 13, 2014
    I find your Snape to be so compelling, I just get swept along with scenes of him and Sirius.

    Harry's ordeal was painful and horrifying and an extremely good depiction of what it can feel like trapped in the vicious cycle of depression in your own mind. I enjoyed Luna and the scene of them helping Harry was beautiful.

    I thought you had a typo there when you said "love is worth living" until I saw it repeated. I would have thought life is worth living. Lol

    Nice teaser for next chapter - like I need anymore reasons to anticipate!!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on July 12, 2014
    Harry survives his darkest fears with the help of some pretty great friends. He has now learned that he can gather strength not only from Draco but those that share his experiences and pain! Severus and Sirius needed to reconnect after such mental devastation and we can only ope that they get their HEA when this is done as well.

    ~~ Meechy
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