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Reviews for Fate Falls

By : Sealpotter
  • From BAFan on July 02, 2014
    Ch. 23

    Ooh, exciting! Never thought I'd be cursing Remix for being insensitive. Very interesting twist concerning Petunia. Good chapter all around!

    July 2, 2014, Edited to say:

    Grr! I'm reposting this review because I only now saw what the stupid auto-correct did to Remus's name. Remix???? Stupid thing!
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  • From djaddict on June 28, 2014
    Argh! Evil, evil author with the cliffhanger!!!

    Really good addition to the story. I liked how Harry and Draco interacted in Harry's head.

    Learning about gifted trolls was interesting and so was seeing people's eyes open up to other possibilities.

    I have really been missing this and am happy that you are back.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on June 28, 2014
    Thiswas a wonderful chapter. Meeting an intelligent troll seems almost an oxymoron to wizards but Harry is trying to break the wizards of their horrible habits of thinking everyone who has magic but isn't a wizard is something below them. He understands that it's the differences we all have that make the world special ad help it flourish. Harry finally got to tease Draco like Draco had been all day but now once again we find our boys in trouble and of course, they're not where Severus expects them. Let's just hope Harry's new power will save he and Draco once more.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From djaddict on June 27, 2014
    OMG!!!! You're back! Yeah!

    Haven't even had the chance to read yet but I am so happy to see an update. Sorry to hear of rl issues, I hope things are working out for you.
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  • From djaddict on June 06, 2014
    I hope that everything is going ok for you.

    Updates to this story are very much missed!

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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on April 18, 2014
    What a sweet Valentine's day!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 17, 2014
    At last Remus realizes he is deserving of someone's love! Good chapter. Lots of things going on. Loved Severus & Sirius getting things straightened out between. He should be honored with how much he means to Sirius. Or was that in the last chapter?
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  • From Ciara_D on April 17, 2014
    Ah, Severus and Sirius. I like this couple.
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  • From YaoiLemonadeLover on April 10, 2014
    Glad to hear that no pumpkins were harmed in the making of this story. :-D

    This is truly a very different and novel take on the reversing-time theme. I have greatly enjoyed reading this story (sometimes even to the detriment of sleep). On a side note, I think you meant Privet Drive and not Private drive, though both words are technically correctly spelled, Privet drive is what was in the original works.
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  • From Ciara_D on April 10, 2014
    A masterful display on Harry's part, though I wonder why he did not face Voldemort5586658360. Draco as his anchor is a beautiful thing.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on April 10, 2014
    Onemof Harry's worst responsibilities s the giving of justice and being judge to another's crimes. He was able to show Remus the pain he was causing others, as well as to himself, by denying his own happiness. He got a brief glimpse into the true depth of the twins bonds....he'll need some bleach to scrub that memory away, but we wish we got to see more because we're perverted like that! His show of power to Voldy was great. Not only did it make Voldemort covetous of Harry's power, he brought low three of the worst of his followers. Can wait
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  • From ANON - djaddict on April 10, 2014
    Oh my! How did I miss a chapter? Eek!

    Really enjoyed the progression made in both chapters. I actually got the "pearls" reference, I think you conveyed it very well.

    Good scene with Remus. All these little threads and changes just tie so beautifully together.

    I absolutely love Harry and Severus' relationship here, it really works well.

    Interesting to see what exactly it means to be an Augur and how what he must do burdens Harry at times. Love how he enticed Voldie!

    Can't wait for more!

    Nitpicky - lol - you are doing the Privet/Private thing again.
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 09, 2014
    That was awesome!!!
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  • From MoonTart on April 06, 2014
    This just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on April 04, 2014
    Very, very nice way to close a chapter! Nothing beats the slow sexy connection of these two. I'm glad Harry was able to reconcile with Petunia and provide her with the truth. Maybe now both of their futures and relationship can really be what it should have been if not colored with jealousy and misunderstandings. Amelia certainly got the shock of her life and I believe she will chose well. I'm looking forward to Voldemort's and the Minister's reactions to Harry's true powers. One will be covetous and the other will be very afraid!

    ~~ Meechy
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