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Reviews for Fate Falls

By : Sealpotter
  • From moodysavage on April 03, 2014
    I know I've been horrible about not commenting because I'm on my phone and not my computer. I swear... autocorrect on the phone drives me crazy, and then it will start changing my text to Spanish... or duplicate words I'm trying to correct! So yeah... I am soooo overdue on tons of stories I'm reading.

    So about that review... I love the whole idea of this story!!! It's not really time travel so I don't stress about the timeline forcing him back to his old life... but he gets to keep all the memories of that timeline without having to keep that timeline... because he's supposed to change it! I think one of my favorite parts was when Narcissa's little heirloom led Harry to Draco... loved that part. And strangely enough I loved how Harry proved his teaching ability and maturity to the Ministry observer. (yeah I know I stink at remembering names... bones right?) And this story hits something totally on the head... we never feel our age. I liked that Harry was an adult in his head but he also isn't so far off from being able to interact with his friends and classmates. Ages may change but who we are is who we are no matter what age.

    And I like that it's not all predictable and smooth going because that would be boring. Harry may have a lot of power and wisdom... but he still has things that are going to be problems that need worked out.

    Oh and I can't forget Severus and Sirius! Severus is my favorite and Sirius usually annoys me in most stories but I love love love him in this story. That Sirius had a crush on Severus all those years ago and that he is so gaga for Severus because let's face it... Severus deserves for someone to be gaga over him. I just love everything about them. Oh and when Harry was going to go out in a ball of glory/revenge when Draco was tortured...awesome!

    oh geeze... this is really getting kind of long and I think I'm fangirling a bit over here. Must get on my computer more lol.


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  • From ANON - blj.14 on April 01, 2014
    That was just plain mean.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on April 01, 2014
    And here I was asking if anyone pulled some good April Fools jokes today. Oh well, I got Got!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 01, 2014
    Brat!!! Happy April 1st.
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  • From moodysavage on April 01, 2014
    oh that was so evil... I so did not see that coming. And the day is almost over and I didn't remember to prank anyone!!! I need to go see who is still awake...
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on April 01, 2014
    You're Evil!
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  • From BlackDawgFang on April 01, 2014
    Cruel... BDF
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  • From djaddict on April 01, 2014
    You. Are sick, twisted and evil.
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  • From Ciara_D on March 31, 2014
    This was ....good. I'm so glad you let Severus and Sirius get all of that out into the open!
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  • From ANON - djaddict on March 28, 2014
    I really like the interaction with Madam Bones in Harry's first class. I think he is giving her just enough info to make her intrigued. I love his ideas and how he is presenting himself and the information to the students.

    Ok, I admit to being really tired (cause I am working 12 hour days, 6 days a week right now) but I don't get the thing with Fred and George. Will you be enlightening the stupid (me) later? Because, I read it over a few times and I still don't get it. Does this mean Fred will still die? {Whimpers}

    His defense of Trelawney initially surprised me but then it made sense as the scene went on. I liked the reading. And she almost made a huge mistake but I like her strategic retreat. I knew she was smart.

    Hey, cool!! A scene inspired by me?? You know I will spend all day trying to figure out which one and why. lol

    I definitely have mixed feelings about Remus. In canon, there are so many things he could have done differently but I guess JKR wanted him wishy-washy. I think he is just jealous and so mired in his misery that he wanted Sirius to be stuck there too. So glad Severus didn't back off, I am loving his character development!!! He really is so believable.

    The information about the Dursley's from the vision kind of surprised me. You mean to tell me that there are women who would sleep with Vernon Dursley voluntarily?!?!?!?!?!?! Not really surprised that he is apparently going to save them though. That is the kind of person Harry is.

    I really can't wait for the next chapter and to see how Harry "reveals his power" to Moldyshorts.

    Nitpicks ('cause I know you missed them, lol): Ch22

    "Her energy of life and torment was unmistakable." Not sure if torment is the word to use here.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 28, 2014
    In response to your Author's note: Ah! "If you don't like the weather wait five minutes." Storms can come up suddenly.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 28, 2014
    An exciting update! And the next one promises to be even more so! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 28, 2014
    What a great chapter! Especially loved the very sexy and romantic Severus and Sirius. So now Draco knows Harry was married to Ginny in the what...other world? possible future? But he to was reassured he - Draco - was the special and only one. Also so very romantic.
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  • From ANON - slmncpm on March 28, 2014
    i so can't wait to see how the next chapters go! *hands you scones and bounces around*
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  • From BAFan on March 28, 2014
    Ch. 22

    I liked this chapter but found myself confused by some parts, Harry's defense of Trelawney being the main one. That really surprised me. Was his change of mind towards her mentioned before and I just forgot? (Which is quite possible!) Though, now that I think about it, I'm not sure whether Harry's disdain for her is canon or fanon. It's been too many years since I last read the books.

    "The flowers all leaned in her direction, and her hands swept across them. With the right ears, a sigh of love could be heard." Ahh. I like that imagery!

    A couple of corrections:

    "Harry stood, almost livid
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