Reviews for Fate FallsBy : Sealpotter |
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I haven't finished yet but I wanted to tell you that this has become one of my very favorite Harry Potter Fanfictions.
ms gina marina at gmail dot com
Chapter 26's margins are much wider than the previous margins. I hope the rest of the chapters are like the first few.
ms gina marina at gmail dot com
Still loving this story but it is time for sleep (darn it)
nitpik: expansive not expensive, even though we know the cottage is costly, the field is huge
Let me know if you still want corrections and I'll make note of them when I read the story again.
ms gina marina at gmail dot com
I'm loving this twist and am grateful it is a long, finished story!
ms gina marina at gmail dot com
Ch 42 Sweet outtake
ch 41: Think the story was awesome and different than most I'd read. actual plot and not just smut for the sake of smut.....not that there is anything wrong with smut...:-D
Nice seeing all the families together. Wow I thought Hermione would make the werewolf charms.
Thank you for writing and sharing.
ch 40: awww the first flutter. Glad Albus got a HEA. oooh Harry and Blaise related; didn't see that one coming.
What a wonderful boon to Hagrid.
Sweet end scene
ch 39: Glad Draco was able to help himself. Balance....
ch 38: Glad Lucius is on thier side. Go Bad Ass Teens!!!
Awesome bargain Harry made for the hallows
ch 37: hmm wonder how Voldy is going to take this bonding? ROFL for Ron and his spider aversion. awww for the white dog. Guess we get to see Voldy's reaction next. Sigh
ch 36: hmmm wonder if Sr will live through the telling? I wondered what DDore was going to choose. Better than death. Wonder if it was just a test though. Doesn't seem right for him to be magicless. Ah well. awww Sanguine and lockhart....that's cute. Well that is one less death eater to worry about.
Now what is Snape up to now?
ch 35: wowsers. Fudge def abused his power. LOVE that Sirius is now free.
ch 34: wow Hell of a choice DDore got. Love Fudge getting what's coming to him.
Ya know I always wondered with all the medical magic and such, why Harry Potter never got his eyes fixed.
ch 33: Glad they were able to help Pansy's mom. Cool new power for Harry. The minsiter is not going to like the backlash of his scheming I'll bet.
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