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By : katatonic
  • From ANON - BRIXI on August 23, 2014
    THEY BETTER DO A MOVIE ABOUT THIS!
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  • From Juliesnaps on April 04, 2014
    Just wanted to drop a line to say how much I enjoyed reading this story. I'm typically a HGSS shippers, but this HGDM was great.
    Your writing style flows very well and the story line was well thought out.
    thank you for posting and I hope you decide to write something else for us!
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  • From Trelweny on February 08, 2014
    That was really exciting. But what happened to the she-wolf, Fera? And why with being so close and already connected did Draco and Hermione wait three years to tie the knot? I suppose I'm biased in not waiting so long, as time is so fleeting... but then if my late husband and I had waited 3 years to marry instead of only the one we were engaged and just getting preparations for it together than he might not have lasted to the altar, and certainly not made it to see our little boy born if I even still GOT my lil'man... so yeah... I guess I'm biased on not waiting that long after actually finding something.
    Although perhaps I'm a hypocrite, now having waited nearly ten years to find something again and Still waiting. :shrugs:

    Loved the idea of the hairpin. Honestly I think you could have written the whole story just with that as a premise. Of course I loved the bitten girls and the premise of pack... even if it would have been an unbalanced pack. What was the she-wolf thinking, forming an all female pack? A pack cannot function and grow without both genders, and in fact instinct on the animal side should have pushed for a more natural pack. Perhaps that's part of why the "runt" ran off alone to find her own pack? There was already something "off" about her? A thought.

    Poor Neville. I wonder if he would appreciate it if I offered him my bottle of mental bleach.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From ANON - MilissaRukia on February 03, 2014
    That is one of the most erotic and exciting stories that I have read lately. I love that there was an actual story line to go with al the delicious smut. Everything was well written without grammar and spelling mistakes. The story flowed so well I felt like I was watching a movie or even there with the characters. You wrote their actions and personalities so well it was easy to follow along and enjoy.
    Thank You for the wonderful story and entertainment it provided, I loved the mental pictures that your words inspired in my mind,
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 03, 2014
    That was fabulously done and I thank you for every word! Thank you also for not making us wait! lol HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 02, 2014
    Wow! This is a fascinating story! I feel badly for Rebecca and Byrony, as they seem to have no knowledge or control and if they end up hurting the others, will feel awful. I hope someone takes down Fera quickly and they get her put somewhere where she can't hurt anyone anymore. I can't say she can be redeemed, since she is in fact an animal. Really good story! Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Siona on February 01, 2014
    Nailed it! Really one of the best I've read. I can't believe this is your first story! Your Hermione is perfect, perfect. And also the other characters you really managed to stick to the original character profiles while aging them just a bit. I love your malfoy too he is just too...again, perfect. The added creative aspects like the hair pin and kitsune were well thought out and don't come off as cheesy at all. The story is interesting, the scenes between H&D are white hot and Harry's commentary is hilarious. Thanks 10/10!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 30, 2014
    Well, that was 4 great chapters and I look forward to more. I like where you have them as acquaintances right now, but I do wonder what he's thinking about her... hmmmm Looking forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4eva
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