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Reviews for Hidden Truths

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 07, 2015
    Hey just a suggestion this time. You always have such interesting story ideas but many times you have consecutive chapters that mainly consist of plans... Individual plans, couple plans, group plans, planning to make more plans...it doesn't have a lot of action or activity which would give a better balance to the story. For example, you might have included severus having a conversation with the twins to show how their relationship is developing which then would give him those thoughts he had about getting information but not wanting to hurt his bond. Including a variety of actions and interactions to show them carrying out the plans is more interesting than them talking or thinking about their plans. I really do enjoy your stories and creativity and look forward to you continuing to develop as a writer :)
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  • From ANON - starr on July 07, 2015
    so the twins spying on Snape and Snape trying to find info also...so funny but Snape really needs to see Dubbles in the wright light there,,,as an ass.....thanks for the update...loved to see Malfoy sr . getting to be attached to Lupin!!!!!and Draco seeing that everything is not as black and white as he thought !!!!
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  • From ANON - R.L. Foxx on June 02, 2015
    I'm really anxious to see how all the plans work out, as well as learn more about the bonds :)
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  • From ANON - frozenspirit on May 20, 2015
    Hi, I have been following your stories and you have very original plot and story lines. I can tell that you take the time to review and make sure everything is written correctly. However, I have noticed that you tend to use the word plenty a lot and odd bits, especially when the characters are thinking about what needs to be done or what has happened in the past. I am personally left wondering what do they need to do? What's plenty? What are they thinking about? I think you know, but the characters are not letting us, the readers, in their thought process. I am not expert in writing, but I do hope this is helpful to you.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on May 19, 2015
    Thank you so much for your incredible update! Excellent new chapter to your story! I think it is smart that the twins are going to work on getting information out of Severus. Hopefully, with them doing it, it won't lead to all out war between the different couples! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - R.L. Foxx on April 16, 2015
    Now I'm really anxious to see what will happen during that conversation :) and to see how the bonds are growing
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  • From ANON - spk on April 11, 2015
    Just discovered this. It is Freaking AMAZING!! Fantastic characterizations. Intriguing storyline. Can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From ANON - starr on April 07, 2015
    i really hope Snape is not bad in this one and help out !!!!!!!!!! Poor Black thought he was going to go nuts there !!!! Thanks for the update !!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on April 06, 2015
    Your new chapter is absolutely incredible! I am so glad that Remus, Lucius and the others are starting to figure out Dumbledore's plans. Hopefully soon they will be able to do something to protect Harry from that manipulative old man. Excellent update! Thank you so much for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - R.L. Foxx on March 24, 2015
    Oh my goodness this story is addicting! I love the pairings, I love the whole idea of what's going on and i just love how everything is slowly falling into place. Really looking forward to the next chapter now :)
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  • From ANON - history on February 27, 2015
    I continue to love your story! You are awesome!
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  • From ANON - Katie on February 25, 2015
    G - l - a - c - i - a - l
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  • From ANON - autumngold on February 23, 2015
    It is excellent that finally some people are seeing Dumbledore for what he really is, a manipulative old man. The tests and trials he has set up for Harry make me sick. Even worse is forcing him to stay with the Dursleys. Thank goodness Harry now has both Bill and Sirius in his corner. Hopefully that will throw off most of Dumbledore's plans. Outstanding update! Can't wait to find out what Remus and Lucius find out from Charlie and Severus!
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  • From ANON - staar on January 15, 2015
    nice to see them all settle down ......lets see what happens next to get the bond to blow up and who will do it !!!!! Thanks
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  • From ANON - autumngold on January 11, 2015
    Oh, I love your excellent update! I am so glad that Sirius is finally wanting the bond between Harry, Bill and himself! Thank goodness he is no longer going to fight the thought of being in a threesome. Harry couldn't have found two better bondmates! He now has two people who will love and protect him forever. Fabulous new chapter! Thank you so much for your wonderful update! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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