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Reviews for The Only One

By : blade-of-the-shadows
  • From ANON - .... on March 02, 2015
    love your story so far hope you write more soon
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  • From ANON - elvinwitch on August 16, 2014
    ok you jumped really far on that one. I am now completely lost, but i love the story please say you are going to fill in the gap in the time line!
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  • From cullenandpotterlover on August 15, 2014
    OMG!!!! Who is the new guy. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - staar on August 04, 2014
    OMG more please this is great, love the way your writing it !!!!!!!! please update soon, want to know what's in the book he is reading !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2014
    This is a very good. I'm glad that Harry's grandmother stepped in and helped Harry. Please update again very soon. I really want to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Bre95 on May 11, 2014
    I love it!!!!!!!! So cool!! Can't wait for an update!!!! Good luck!!!
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  • From ANON - HEARTSTAR on April 25, 2014
    oh more please I so wan to read more thank you
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  • From ANON - tinamaki on April 22, 2014
    This story was very entertaining. I would appreciate it greatly if you wrote an other chapter, if it pleased you.. It is really great. And the mother of Blaise is really entetaining and I think that her behaviour is a bit cute...
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  • From ANON - carol on April 05, 2014
    good story! please continue on with your updates. I eagerly await your next installment.
    thank you for your time and effort on our behalfs.
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  • From ANON - The Pink Fuzzy Elephant on April 01, 2014
    This is a very interesting story I would love to read more.:D
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  • From ANON - pooh on April 01, 2014
    Loving it! changed computers and it took for ever finding your site...Thank Heavens I did...
    like the "different" story line and the characters...looking forward to the next chapter..you are on my check it list!
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  • From Jan on March 23, 2014
    Oh, I can't wait for chapter 3 to be updated along with much more ^_^
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  • From ANON - Marie robicheay on March 23, 2014
    I love the first two chapters of this story. I hope you continue with.
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  • From ANON - savannah.morgan on March 21, 2014
    I love it and I like when Harry isn't so easily manpulated. Can't wait to read more....thank you for a lovely first two chapters.
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  • From BAFan on March 21, 2014
    Ch. 1 & 2

    There are two major stumbling blocks for me in this story. First, the Queen has been in America for the past fifteen years or so, and never once tried to communicate with her pregnant daughter or her son-in-law? Even if she had entrusted their care to Dumbledore, I find it hard to believe she wouldn't want to talk to Lily and Sirius once in a while. Second, how did Dumbledore expect to maintain his deceptions once she returned to the UK - and unless he planned to assassinate her and all her retinue he had to know she could return at any time.

    Also, you keep making allusions to Ron and Hermione becoming more distant from Harry since Sirius's escape from Azkaban; is this because they knew that Sirius is Harry's father? Maybe you plan to explain all this in later chapters, in which case I will patiently wait for further updates.

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