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Reviews for Burning Day

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SParker on September 05, 2014
    about #18..

    1. Yep...no doubt you have definitely gotten better at describing vivid scenery. :-)
    U iz steppin' up yo game.

    I like the sentimentality..or I should reflection..towards the end between the two
    men [feels strange saying men when you've viewed them as boys for so long] and I feel for them,
    but 'needs must'...as that partial saying goes.

    2. Sooo...are you going to dig up Mr. What his face in the future for a brief appearance?

    3. I noticed you have a ''he's leaving'' theme going on. Makes me wonder is everything alright?
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  • From SParker on August 25, 2014
    about 17..

    Ende sounds interesting and would be a good asset for the Court.
    Umm...by the way, what happened to Harry's Knight??? Mr. what's his face?

    Were you hoping we would forget about him??? *tsk*

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  • From ANON - Jester on August 19, 2014
    That sounds like Brightness feeding on Magic to become real,
    or Harry showing of to Draco as well!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 16, 2014
    about #16..

    Just another day at the office for Harry & Draco...seriously they need some downtime.
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  • From ANON - Jester on August 11, 2014
    Nice now the Ministry has to get the oveall public on their side and
    it will be easier for all of them!
    Hope there is no panicattack with the Dragon hovering beside the Unspeakables.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 10, 2014
    about #15...

    A small question...Harry isn't still wearing glasses, is he? If so, why?

    ...and good idea on the phoenix illusions. Though I do miss ole' girl. :-(
    Any chance for a different type of familiar for Harry? I still say kitten, we've done
    birds already. Besides cats are sneaky & can move around undetected, the perfect spies.
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  • From ANON - Jester on August 01, 2014
    Hee well thanks! Not sure if my way of thinking as a castle is good though.
    At least its a magical castle that can be soft and is magical powerful animagus.
    I wonder if the founders had the same feeling with the castle, or if the magic
    just grew over the century.
    I am glad that Draco is ok. That showing off of his wound reminded me of the
    Hippogriff thing in school.
    I also look forward to that showing off thing they talked about
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  • From ANON - Jester on July 28, 2014
    Okay yeah you are right, he doesnt really need it. Well as Hogwarts is kind of
    an extension to his magic and all with the bond that makes him an Hogwarts Animagi.
    Nothis as common as a cat no I am a caste. grin Sorry for that
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  • From BAFan on July 27, 2014
    Ch. 13

    Great chapter! Harry's enemies have left him no choice but to play hard-ass, since they continue to attack him or those under his protection. When will they learn? Idiots.

    I agree with the reviewer (Jester?) who suggested that Harry should become an animagus, but I think some kind of extremely venomous snake, such as a taipan, would be better. Or a spider even. Something that might allow him to remain unseen by his enemies until it was too late. Geeze, I sound bloodthirsty! *g*
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 26, 2014
    about #13..

    *looks with glee at Harry*
    Me: Harry Potter you're the GREATEST!
    Harry: Yes I know. *smirks*
    Draco: *rolls eyes* Don't encourage him.

    I thought for sure there was going to be a BATTLE. You haven't done those in a while.
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  • From CareLessLover on July 26, 2014
    If I was an Unspeakable, I would have had a heart attack. Harry's display of power is frieghting. Poison Master H, thank you for your great service. I'm sure Dark Lord Potter will need more poisons in the future. Ah. Draco darling, getting a bit hot under the robes? Yes, I do look forward to your next encounter with Harry.
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  • From ANON - Jester on July 21, 2014
    Love it!
    I know this has little to do with the story plot, but I was wondering
    if Harry with all his power ever thought about becoming an Animagus?
    Not sure, but it seems like a very nice way around some situations
    where he needs to be more hidden. (Well if he doesnt turn out to be
    ab elephant) That just came to my mind while writing dont ask me why.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 20, 2014
    about #12..

    Let me guess, Hortensia is the Mad Scientist, right? :-)
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  • From BAFan on July 16, 2014
    Ch. 11

    *sigh* It was disturbing to see Harry threatening Draco the way he did in the faux memory, and to see Draco being so servile, for that matter. Finally this series is beginning to mesh with "Charming When He Needs To Be."
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 15, 2014
    about #11...

    Sooo, in a way is the latter half of this chapter about to tie in with the
    one shot that started it all?
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