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Reviews for Burning Day

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - R.L. Foxx on April 22, 2015
    :) just wow. I love this series with a passion I can't even describe, it's a plot that has been used before but not in such a fantastic manner :) I'm so in awe and just throughly enjoyed the last of thus awesome series
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  • From ANON - staar on October 28, 2014
    Just had to say that I read all 3 of them and loved them all !!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jester on October 06, 2014
    How nice. I am glad Hogwarts is still a place of peace for them.
    And I am glad Draco is getting what he wants too.
    And.. a The End is always sad to read
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 05, 2014
    about the end...

    Well this was a nice little run. I kind of thought you would tie the one shot that began this
    with the story, but it's all good.

    The ending was kind of vague and had me thinking what future you had in store for Harry. I will
    definitely miss Persephone, demented bird that she was. :-) and I wish those two much happiness and
    hopefully there won't be TOO much drama when their relationship comes out...yeah right.

    ..and I won't say anything about the TV.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2014
    Are you the same writer as a few months ago?

    I apologize for asking, but I'm awefully curious about a change I noticed in your writing style. There was a subtlety in character psyche exposition, how an action or lack thereof from a character told me more than his words in your stories. A sigh, raising a nervous hand to worry his hair absentmindedly, tripping on a peddle as he makes for a shop were all narrative devices that made the characters real and complex for me. It was organic storytelling and it made the characters believable.

    For the passed few months though, I see conversations between characters solely for the purpose of exposing a character's emotions and thought. Those scenes seem forced and are often unnecessary. What's more, those often go against a character's nature ; indeed, why would a cautious, untrusting and usually so professional Auror let himself answer a criminal's inquiries on his private life? Why would a Dark Lord launch himself in speaking reassurances to a person he personally doesn't care much about? Why would Rosenthal even NEED reassurances and explanations? Why would Briseis?

    Either way, I think it's an odd change in style. I miss the believable characters and complex intrigue. I miss the gray part of each character's personality, where a bad guy could become sympathetic and a hero could make the wrong choices and be deceived.

    Just tell me this : if the reason behind this change is a shift in your attention between writing fanfictions to writing something else, please send me an email to let me know. As I often said over the years, I enjoy reading your stories and what you do with characters. If I can find that again in other work besides fanfictions, I would read those for sure. ange_925@hotmail.com
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  • From BAFan on October 04, 2014
    Ch. 21

    This is the end?? Damn. I've enjoyed this very much and will really miss it! Poor Harry. Well, at least he has Draco.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on October 04, 2014
    Sad to see this story end, but what a ride. The ending was beautiful and though they still have to hide their relationship, they at least know they are well and truly loved! Thank you for such a wonderful story. I look forward to your next idea.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Christopher11 on October 03, 2014
    With all due respect, I disagree that he 'cut his losses' here. If you were going to write more to this story, the more truthful storyline would be that by terrifying everyone, he has made himself MORE enemies who will sooner or later take him down someway, somehow.
    That is the problem I had with this story, the whole "Cut the losses!" angle to it. The Unspeakables were NOT being unreasonable, Harry was being unreasonable by not realizing "Okay, taking the mantle of a DORK Lord! (which would be the true term for it) is an extremely bad idea and is just going to terrify people!"
    Best thing he could have done at the beginning of the story was to leave the Dark Lord appellation out of it and say "I am sorry but I am not going to be pushed around anymore and I am not going to allow you to take over Hogwarts! Deal with it, Hogwarts is now neutral ground akin to a separate country!"
    Like I said, Harry created his own problems in this story and he kept on COMPOUNDING them at every single damned turn by doing something outrageous, like 'marking' someone with an indelible mark that will strangle them if they ignore 'child abuse' (which some people say that spanking is child abuse and would have those people strangled) and various other things.

    Harry turned into a dictator in this story and dictators are ALWAYS taken down sooner or later. They might last a few decades but they ALWAYS piss off someone too much and end up taking a dirt nap.
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  • From ANON - Jester on September 30, 2014
    Wow amazing as always and a grand show for the Misistry.
    I hope that the decision that Haryr made doesnt have to
    many consequences.
    Maybe he should seek out Nightshade again?
    Then again I can imagine that he doesnt want to know, but
    he might want to thank her for trying?
    I am glad I finally have time again to read your works!
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  • From Christopher11 on September 28, 2014
    And now when the rest of the world finds out what Harry did today, he will have the rest of the world after him, so he has only compounded and multipled by 10 his issues.
    I'm sorry but if Harry thinks this is going to be the end of it, he is insane.... though much of what he has already done has cemented that appellation in my mind.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 28, 2014
    about #20...

    That was a nice touch adding the Veil. No one ever thinks to add it in their story every now & then, only just
    the basics.

    You know, I get the feeling I know where you 'might' be headed with Harry, with all the phoenixes & fire.

    ..and like Draco I completely forgot Harry had an Auror career once upon a time. :-/

    Say do you watch Sleepy Hollow?
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on September 27, 2014
    Now that's what I call a cleansing with fire! Harry just took down the entire department of mysteries Lang with all of its artifacts without actually killing a single person! Brilliant, scary and powerful! Meet the next true "Dark Lord" and weep for justice!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From SParker on September 19, 2014
    #19...

    WTH??!!?? WTH!!! ...and that's where you end it???
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  • From BAFan on September 16, 2014
    Ch. 19

    So...Harry hurried off to rescue Draco and left Nightshade alone in his office? That doesn't seem a very wise thing to do, but maybe he has protections there I've forgotten about. And I kinda have to agree with Christopher's review; Harry does seem to be causing at least some of his problems.
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  • From Christopher11 on September 07, 2014
    Harry is creating most of his own issues here. I am betting that there is someone behind the scenes manipulating everyone and pushing forward this "Harry Potter and all 'Dark' Lords have to be taken down!" nonsense.
    The story was good but now it is just dragging on and on and on and on. Unless there is some revelation, that Gorenson was NOT the only nor main source of the issues, very soon the story in my opinion is going to stall to a halt and be unable to be revived.
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