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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 25, 2014
    about #24..

    Sooo...Harry just surrendered the vaults, but not the money? That went back to the Black heirs, right? If so, then
    it went back to Harry, since he is one.

    By the way, good suspense...and we're coming to the end right?
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 25, 2014
    But I don't want Harry penniless and giving so much. I like him filthy rich and very very powerful. I even hate him giving the space under the vaults to them! I know at least in Lucius eyes this means that Harry really values Draco and that Draco now has the upper hand since he has no money and no "under vaults" but still... I just don't like the Goblins beating Harry at all. (actually I like it best, I think, when the Goblins are very powerful and kind of mysterius but like Harry.)
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  • From ANON - staar on October 25, 2014
    wow is Harry now even with the Goblins ???? can't believe they took Draco...man and Harry gave all his vaults to them....great update can't wait for the next one !!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 19, 2014
    about #23...

    Once again, I like how you portray Lucius & Narcissa as a married couple, I like their
    talks together, even when Lucius is being a butt. :-)

    Ever thought about biting the bullet and doing an evil Lucius?
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on October 19, 2014
    Narcissa write a truly awesome letter as Lucius.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 11, 2014
    Okay an adult working on Harry's side to help him to alter his having to live as a slave etc. Harry and Draco need to have a talk about how powerful Harry's magic is and go more into how they feel about it.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 06, 2014
    about 21..

    Glad to see these two men get some of these cards on the table. Now it's time
    for Harry & Draco to have their own heart-to-heart.
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  • From ANON - Jester on October 06, 2014
    That libary is damn useful and I applaud Hermione for that
    spell she was using. That is quite a nice one!
    I am looking forward how they can start to live a nicer life.
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  • From ANON - staar on October 05, 2014
    ok I have a ? why does everyone hate Harry now , after all je has done....I really don't get it...Draco's father well I get him he wants Draco with a woman to have kids but then why did he save Potter !!!!!!!!!! thanks for the update and see you soon !!!
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  • From BAFan on October 04, 2014
    Ch. 21

    Whoa. I think Lucius and Harry both handled that conversation well, all things considered. Lucius could have given an ultimatum (or tried to) and Harry could have either blown his top or succumbed to guilt. Kudos to them both for not doing that!

    I think I found an error:

    "'Then believe that I
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  • From ANON - staar on September 28, 2014
    and now after all this time they want Harry to go back to Ginny!!!! are they nuts or what and Ginny has not even written to him so what's wrong with this pic here thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!
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  • From ANON - Jubbles on September 23, 2014
    This is so brilliant. The injustice of all and how Draco behaves... I'm adoring this fic! Can you email me when you update? Thanks!
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  • From SParker on September 21, 2014
    about #19...

    I don't know...but it feels like this strategy is going to blowup in their faces.
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  • From ANON - staar on September 21, 2014
    yea well can't wait til he can get back at everyone.....they should al pay...and Draco well they will always think badly of him thanks for the update and see you soon again !!!!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 20, 2014
    What an ugly thing they have to pretend! How can they ever be themselves in the wizarding world even after a year? They will be stuck with this unfair version of themselves for ever if someone doesn't find a way to kill them "to save the world from evil Malfoys and a crazy too powerful wizard who will turn dark and kill".
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