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Reviews for The Long Defeat

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  • From SParker on September 19, 2014
    about 18...

    Well that was a nice...short...interlude.
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  • From ANON - staar on September 13, 2014
    nice update ??? dumb ? why is Harry in this spot....the dark magic that he has it's because of what ..sorry to be a pest but it will help me understand the whole picture here.....see you soon
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  • From ANON - staar on September 09, 2014
    New reader here !!!! This is really good...by the title I was not going to read it but so glad that I did ....now you have me waiting for your next update to see what happens next and how the boys are !!!!! thank you have really enjoyed this !!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 06, 2014
    Maybe Lucius is feeling that Draco is more grown up and independent than he thought. He might be changing his view of Harry as well as Harry & Draco's relationship. A relationship that still seems to be evolving. Harry doesn't seem as close to Ron & Hermione as he was. An natural effect of living with and being part of another family's life I'm sure.
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  • From SParker on September 01, 2014
    about #16..

    Wonderful chapter.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 30, 2014
    Draco seems have figured out how to get through to Harry now. Is Harry truly becoming more caring (I hate the word fond) of Harry or just passing time and acting to just placate the Malfoys?
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  • From SParker on August 25, 2014
    about #15...

    You know, I can't help but think that Narcissa should put her input into this also.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 23, 2014
    If I were Harry I'd want revenge also. I think I would have just moved to another wizarding town in another country and told everyone to go hang. I would think people would read how he's treated and maybe feel guilty after everything that Harry did for them including this slavery thing that he didn't need to do.
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  • From ANON - Jester on August 19, 2014
    I cant get that picture out of my head,
    of Harry being cuddles to Draco.
    Its a lovely one, even more so if Harry will
    enjoy it fully some day.
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  • From ANON - Amber on August 18, 2014
    I love this story! Absolutely love it. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 16, 2014
    about #14..

    Why do I get the feeling Harry is going to go 'ballistic' one day & damn the consequences.
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  • From ANON - Jester on August 11, 2014
    Sweet! He is finally learning to relax. Good job Draco and Narcissa!
    The new rooms sound very, very lovely.
    Thans for writing x3
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 10, 2014
    about #13...

    This was a nice interlude. :-) I'm glad Harry got his own set of bedrooms, as a matter of fact,
    I've always wanted to see Harry get his own rooms in the Malfoy Manor, whenever he stays there, during
    one of your stories. Any chance of a balcony with those rooms?

    ..and it's good to see everyone acting mature.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 09, 2014
    Harry seems to finally be settling in and accepting the idea that he can be happy and he doesn't owe his total being to
    the public".

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  • From BAFan on August 09, 2014
    Ch. 13


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