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Reviews for The Long Defeat

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Victoria on August 09, 2014
    I am absolutely loving this!
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  • From CareLessLover on August 05, 2014
    Such a chaste kiss, you're making my heart swoon!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 03, 2014
    about #12..

    I think I'm beginning to realize the true meaning behind the story title. :-)
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  • From sparklewitch182 on August 03, 2014
    Hi, just wanted to say that I am really liking your story. I'm new to this website and I'm wondering if there is a way to get email updates for this story? I did finally figure out how to get it on my "reading" list. I read all the chapters Friday and Saturday and now I see another one is posted! So happy that you keep it updated! There was one on another site that I'm reading and its been MONTHS with no update.
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  • From BAFan on August 02, 2014
    Ch. 12

    Yay, a breakthrough of sorts! I really like this portrayal of Narcissa.
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  • From ANON - Jester on July 28, 2014
    Narcissa is such an amazing woman. I love how you write her out
    in this story more and more.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 26, 2014
    I agree with Draco (and I think Narcissa thought so too) that Harry should not leave the Wizarding World at the end of the year. Stay and make them see what they've done...lost their honor and any help from super wizard Harry in the future. He could work on getting even with the Goblins. Also he might try and relax and enjoy the year as much as possible. Use it to gather thoughts, make plans, get to know Malfoys and anybody he wants to get Draco to ask over or take him over to visit.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 26, 2014
    about #11..

    I think this is the first time I've seen you do a honest [..and long..] conversation
    between Lucius & Narcissa...that showed how well they communicate as spouses. O_O
    This was pretty good.

    ..and I hope Draco is slowly getting thru to Harry.
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  • From ANON - Jester on July 21, 2014
    Narcissa is so lovely. And Draco is really good at confusing himself.
    And I am glad Harry found that book, whaterver it really did it seemed
    to help a great deal.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 20, 2014
    about #10


    Leave it to Narcissa to be the one to give Harry something to think about. :-)
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  • From ANON - Jester on July 15, 2014
    Sounds like the best way to look at the future like that yeah, but maybe
    Draco will give him other better options for his future ;)
    Lovely chapter and lovely kiss
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  • From ANON - HEARTSTAR on July 15, 2014
    nice I love how you have the malfoys inter acting with Harry
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  • From BAFan on July 14, 2014
    Ch. 9

    "Draco couldn
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  • From CareLessLover on July 13, 2014
    They kissed! Oh sure, a half sham for now but this is sure to open new gateways to the heart. Though I do wonder how Draco's parents took that shock.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 12, 2014
    Quite a different and good plot that's working out very well. I like the slytherin way Draco is trying to work Harry over to his side.
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