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Reviews for The Long Defeat

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Jester on July 09, 2014
    Ohhh what are they going to do to the gobblins??
    That reminds me .. Harry would be without anything if he left the wizarding world.
    I mean he has 0 money because of the goblins. The Weasleys and Hermione would help
    him sureley, but they do not have much themself. Did he think about what to do afterward?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 06, 2014
    about #8..

    Damn, on the one hand, it was cute how Draco was trying to get his attention, then,
    on the other, I thought for sure Harry was going to beat the snot out of him for mockery. O_o
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  • From ANON - Jester on July 02, 2014
    The more you write and the more I read I hope for Harry to gain his
    freedom back. Away from the mass of wizarding Britain.
    Not that I think that Dracis wants him to do that, but thats the
    feeling I have. Harry as bodyguard is quite sexy though. He would
    be more if he was free and willing to do so. ;)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 01, 2014
    about#7..

    He can say what he wants, but Harry makes an effective bodyguard.
    Will you actually let Harry leave the Wizarding World? It would be
    a shame if he does.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 29, 2014
    Going well! Liked Harry as an A#1 bodyguard. He could start his own company. I can't believe the people and goblins. After
    all, if Harry hadn't killed Voldemort, at some point he would have taken over the bank & killed or made slaves of the goblins.
    Yet the people & goblins are ungrateful and cruel besides.
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  • From ANON - Sp777 on June 24, 2014
    About #7...

    I get the feeling the Malfoys and Harry will learn a lot from each other
    when this is all said and done.
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  • From ANON - Jester on June 23, 2014
    That developes wonderful. I like Narcissas way and I like the way you handled Lucius crimes
    against Harrys ... family.
    I can not wait for the next chapter. I look forward to it.
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  • From CareLessLover on June 22, 2014
    The way Harry acted in the last chapter, granted it was to fool the goblins, something about it made me feel uncomfortable. Sorry for the confusion.
    It makes sense now. Harry wasn't comfortable with it either.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2014
    After this year of psuedo servitude when he mostly won the war, endured the Dursleys', and all the manipulations of Albus he has got to be changed and probably not in a good way...savage temper, no patience and wanting to have absolutely nothing to do with "the public", goblins or the Ministry. Draco will have to really work at it if he wants him to stay.
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  • From CareLessLover on June 19, 2014
    I got the cold shiver down my spine. I know it's not real, that it's an act, but something about it is off.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 18, 2014
    about #5...

    Awww...I was hoping Harry would have blown a gasket. :-(

    Potter pushed his lip further out, until it could have supported a continent with ease
    LoL! That was funny! :-D
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  • From Tommy-Lane on June 17, 2014
    Oh god Harry's going to snap if he has to keep doing that! I loved how unnerving it was for Draco to see Harry like that, such a great reaction from him.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 14, 2014
    Wow! Harry has to put up with that for a year? Even assuming it doesn't happen to often...I don't know...the stress may ruin any possible future relationship with the Malfoys'.
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  • From BAFan on June 14, 2014
    Grr. Let's hope the Goblins don't visit very often.
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  • From Ciara_D on June 14, 2014
    Something's going to disintegrate soon after that. Gah, I kinda really hate these goblins!
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