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Reviews for The Long Defeat

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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 09, 2014
    about #4..

    I've always loved the Narcissa & Harry interactions in stories like these.
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  • From Ciara_D on June 08, 2014
    It sometimes surprises me how many of my favorite stories I'm following are all by the same author, you! Your imagination is amazing!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 07, 2014
    Like the way Harry's personality is developing in this story...VERY powerful, confident, crafty, and totally himself (no trying to act like a purebred or bowing to his "betters").
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 01, 2014
    This is a different Harry than is usual in stories. I like him. He's finally realized that people in general are willing to demand his help and protection but then show him disrespect and demand he sacrifice himself over and over and have since he was a child. He's barely a young man know right?
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  • From CareLessLover on June 01, 2014
    My oh my! Mrs. Malfoy was correct. Draco does need a body guard! Glad that Harry and Draco agreed to have Harry train Draco. Maybe that will keep Harry active (mentally as well) and help him change his opinion on the world around him.
    Yay! I love novel length stories! Keep up with the brilliant work!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 31, 2014
    about #3...

    Maaaan, this is going to be an interesting year for the Malfoys. :-)
    Harry doesn't have nightmares, does he? But, I see him too strong of an
    individual to be laid low by one that deals with the war.

    But, I have to admit this Harry in this story is VERY intriguing...and I must
    admit I'm curious to see what would happen if he did snap at one of them.

    On another note, the story Light of the Life, are you having beta problems? What's
    going with that one?
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  • From Tommy-Lane on May 30, 2014
    Intriguing, can't wait to see where you're going with this.
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  • From CareLessLover on May 28, 2014
    Body guard? Good lie. But I don't know how the goblins will react with Harry leaving the walls of the Manor. The terms were to keep him behind those walls. Unless Mrs. Malfoy (or any of the three) know of a loophole, I'm still at a loss.
    Very interesting sort none-the-less. How many chapters might this story be?
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  • From ANON - HEARTSTAR on May 26, 2014
    this is really interesting so far where is there promt from again I would love to see more ty
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  • From Drarry-Obsessed on May 25, 2014
    Will you be delving deeper into how exactly Harry acquired his new powers? It's rather peeving when Harry (or Draco) suddenly gets new magic without a plausible backstory of the acquisition.
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  • From ANON - Moon Whistler on May 24, 2014
    Thank you very much for the new chapter! Love it!!!
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  • From ANON - Clau on May 24, 2014
    I think I know where you are leading this story to. The captivity, the slavery pretense and the volatile behavior of two members of the family is sure to trigger bad memories from childhood. This time though, his hope does not come from dreams of being rescued, but the real (and probably constant?) show of care Narcissa offers him. It's weird, but judging from the way Narcissa acts around Harry from her first appearance in chapter one til now, I'm guessing she knows (or suspects) a lot more about his childhood trauma than she lets on. She displays a longing to care for him beyond just getting along for one year. Oooor I'm reading too much into this.

    I wonder how Hermione and Ron will play into this scenario. Will they be allowed secret visits or the Malfoys wouldn't risk it? How much does Harry's friends' hostility towards Malfoys remain and would it influence Harry's views of his "captors" much? What about the Weasley family?

    Narcissa wishes for Harry to have some sort of occupation, but what about the Malfoys? What do they do now that the war is over? Harry had been training to be an Auror, but what about Draco? It would be interesting to see everyday life go on around Harry while his own agenda is on hold.

    Again, always great reading your work!
    Clau
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 24, 2014
    about 2..

    I get the feeling Harry is going to explode one day. I just hope he doesn't
    tear the Manor down.
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  • From ANON - Rabiarose on May 22, 2014
    Interesting start to an already unusual story. We would assume that Harry would be forgiven for the damage he caused to Gringotts, but I like this new take on the post-war world.
    Can't wait to see these characters develop.
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  • From ANON - Jester on May 20, 2014
    Yay thats an awesome beginning! I love that Harry is so powerful that he could break free, but thinks in long term to get his peace
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