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Reviews for The Long Defeat

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on May 19, 2014
    Well, talk about a different direction in your storytelling.
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  • From ANON - W on May 18, 2014
    Ok, I've been your ghostreader for a loooong time now, but with this story you've managed to intrigue me to a level that I can't keep silent any more! Brilliant start, can't wait to read more. I liked the way that, although Harry is the one being chained, Draco comes across as the one more vulnerable. I don't know how you manage the output you're working on, but as long as it doesn't collide with your real life, keep it up, you're making a lot of people (including me) very happy with your stories. Your plot design and insight into your characters (which are, despite your many stories centered around them, never quite alike) are astounding! THANKS FOR YOUR HARD WORK and I bow to the gift you're obviously possessing!
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  • From BAFan on May 18, 2014
    Ch. 1

    Wow! Very, very interesting start. I can't remember running across any fanfic with a similar theme. Harry having to turn over all his vaults to the goblins or having to work for them for a specified time, yes - but not actual enslavement. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - chester on May 18, 2014
    Where do you come up with these ideas?? You are amazing!! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Moon Whistler on May 18, 2014
    Ohhhh ghod you got me hooked, love it!!! Please can we all have another chapter soon!!!
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